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Word Count: | 27,408 |
Average Words: | 1,827 |
Pages: | 100 |
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There aren't that many chapters currently. However, I enjoy the now available ones! I hope to see more of this quality content!
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Oh? You want to read more? Sure!
Story: A solid 7/10. There's not much to complain about it, but it's a little slow. But has potential.
Writing: 9/10! This is really great writing! It's easy to follow, and a first grader could read it.
Update Stability: Well... The Chapter Updates are pretty slow... So a 6/10.
Character Design: There aren't many interactions with other characters now, so I can't express a Rating for now. And by chapter 2, there is only Jack (the protagonist) that can talk.
World Design: (Spoiler Alert) I'm the most interested in this section of the story. Are there other Reincarnations who are not Dungeon Creators? Are all the Reincarnations from earth? Is Earth the only section where one is able to reincarnate? And so on... Another 9/10!
So overall, I would rate this 8/10!
Also, I want more chappies!! >.<
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Great story and I like the idea that a MC can create creatures and plants and environments so If you need any help go look at Deviantart. Com for new ideas for new creatures and plants the MC can create in the future.
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For some reason my previous commentary disappeared lol. To reiterate what I said before, so far I am 10 chapters in and a very enjoyable story is in the works. There has been a great set up for the beginning world building, the potential abilities of the dungeon has been explained very well, and the growth that is apparent so far has been fun to read. I very much think you should give a story a try, because it is well written, fun to read, and has some great potential.
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