By allenPie
A 22nd Century man who used to play an Ero-game for women, called Power and Sword, is reincarnated into a world similar to the game. Born as a woman in a strange matriarchy, she must level up to defend against the coming war with the Demon Queendo
Well written. Grammar seems fine. World looks promising. MC is a bit insecure in the beginning but that has a reason and is well explained. The Social structure of the society is definitely not run of the mill and adds depth to the story and keeps the reader interested.
>>> BE WARE that the MC was male then gender bendered into female but kept their phallus. The author doesn’t like the word futanari so it isn’t tagged.
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This is a beautiful story about loving yourself and others, with strong characters and an interesting setting. It also holds the distinction of being one of the few stories I've read with transgender characters who aren't fetishised, which is nice to see. And the smut is hot, so...
Technically the writing is colourful and evocative, with very little in the way of poor grammar or spelling. It could do with a little bit of copy and line editing, but there's nothing so distracting that it warrants reducing the rating.
It really is a lovely read, and I recommend this story to anyone who enjoys queer-positive works.
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