From a purely critique's POV of this story for the future readers of this novel, here is what I think: the story will not last long.

Firstly, I will only write about the cons of this novel. Whatever chapters may come after the Christmas specials will not be included in this review.

In the beginning, the protagonist is reincarnated into the world of MHA, along with knowledge of the world's canon events. That alone is a red flag, for if you have started reading, then you will notice that the story could've still stood on its own even without the reincarnation plot. As for why, it is because the protagonist is rich, and he is also rich in familial love. Now separate the reincarnation plot from the mentioned scene from earlier, and it would change nothing but the background of the protagonist now being a kid from a rich family aspiring to become a hero.

Bestowing upon the power of omniscience is akin to giving the protagonist the answers to his problems. Only a pushover wouldn't take advantage of such a convenient power. Now that you are informed of such a setting, you can already picture what happens next. The death of Overhaul, a MAJOR ANTAGONIST, had to happen so EARLY in the story.

Villains exist to incite conflict, whether it be psychologically, physically, or emotionally. Killing said villain is to cut off conflict, but conflict is what keeps stories going; it's what makes them entertaining. Now, the author focuses on the R18 to keep the readers clinging. I mean, who can say no to banging Toga? But it is also due to that some characters have become atomic particles (less mentioned).

There is no emotional or moral growth for the protagonist because he does not cooperate with his classmates, excluding the "hotties, " of course. Instead of teamwork, which is what MHA is known for, it is now a solo run. I mean, who can blame the protagonist for having the ability to ENSLAVE people's souls?

Now, I'll end the review here. I'll politely apologize now that some words may be a bit harsh. I don't want to dissuade writers.

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Its been a great story the pacing is neither slow or too fast the MC is manipulative but not too much just enough the character instruction is great 

All in all you should give it a try you wont be disappointed. I guarantee it wont be a waste of your time 

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First, I couldn't adjust the stars I could give this series, it would be a 4 so far. 

Second, as this story is just in its infancy you need to take this review with a pinch of salt. 

Now; so far the story is very interesting, and the author has done a good job so far setting up our MCs personality, and since it's a fanfic, the story doesn't need much set-up. I would go so far as to say I wish there was a lot more of this story, as the concept or the way it is written I nice and compelling. I can't say I have noticed any obvious grammatical errors, but it has been a few days since I read the story, but nothing jumps to mind. 

Our MC is interesting as it seems he is going for the more anti-hero role, whilst still being a hero and doing good, but he is doing good for his own means. I would like to see more, but this is all there is at the time of writing this review. 

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