I was reading this until I noticed that I was just scrolling at the speed of fast from how dull it is. MC's powers are under-utilized and then instantly amazing the next like a CH novel about face slapping. Author put so much infodump that the info that was important to character progression got buried by unecessary stuff. 1★ is me being generous. I honestly dont trust anyone who can give 3★ to this, let alone 5★.

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Geyyzer

Status: c24

Mar 24, 2023

I am going to stop reading here. Couldn't bring myself to continue after chapter 24. Story started off with an exposition dump and then it just killed itself immediately by providing MC with omnipotence. This story is a good example of why it is not a good idea to provide unlimited power to main characters at the beginning of the story.

(Don't read this spoiler if you still want to have a chance to enjoy the story, because you can't unsee what you have seen)

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Power to manipulate reality only serves to show how dumb MC is in the story. The author also failed to provide a hard standard of how MC's power progression should be. First author tried to limit the MC's power by setting up the idea that energy is needed for MC to use his powers, but this becomes irrelevant because author proceeds to let MC do ridiculously powerful things without realizing.

Chapter 4 - MC begins to change properties of matter i.e turning dirt into gold. Do I really need to explain how this can be abused?

Chapter 11 - Correction of knowledge. MC uses his power to learn Japanese language by "correcting" his existing knowledge. (If you don't think this is overpowered, let me give you an example. I can write on a piece of paper how to pilot Gundam or how to use magic. That becomes my knowledge, and by using this "correction of knowledge" I will learn the proper way to do so.)

Chapter 21 - MC is now invincible

Chapter 22 - Author wants to convince you that MC is not invincible.

Chapter 24 - MC proceeds to manipulate concepts by creating a sword out of thin air with imaginative properties that're non-existent. (Recap: It is easier for MC's power to affect himself than other objects.) MC can essentially provide himself concept-level buffs i.e HP/MP/STR/DEX/INT +9999, but he doesn't because he "can't".

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My brain doesn't allow me to enjoy this story. This problem could've simply been avoided if the system that the MC was provided with gives him an option to buy abilities with points and he can earns points by doing so and so, instead of outright giving him the power to do anything he wants but "can't".

My rating for this is 2/5, 1 for decent grammar and 1 because I'm a sucker for "Infinity" stories.

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dJava

Status: chapter 78: truth

Jul 2, 2023

Long-short-story: Too many info dump. The part of the "story/adventure/action" are only minimum with the most are "long narrative". Very minimum character/relationship development, it just happend (at least for the most of characters beside MC and fMC. For them, they had "too many").

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bibliophic

Status: chapter 139: path of dreams, path...

Jul 5, 2023

I really like the premise of the story but man, I just can't bring myself to enjoy it. I can handle info dump here and there, but if you do it almost every chapter it ruin the story flow. They explain a lot of unnecessary stuff (and sometimes irrelevant to the plot). There's also multiple instance where they explain the same concept/point multiple times.

that being said, the grammars are pretty okay. There's multiple typos here and there but it's ignorable. The story pace is pretty okay if you can skip/ignore the info dump part. I would say the tag is misleading too, the MC is not "weak to strong" by any mean. Even the base MC power is already very op. Yes his power wasn't that good yet at the start, but he should be at the same level as rimuru tempest on the starting point or maybe even better.

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SpicyBurrito

Status: chapter 167

Sep 7, 2023

Exposition the novel right here. The chapters are 90% internal dialogue and over explaining in circles. "The floor is white therefore that means someone painted the floor and if someone painted the floor that means someone existed in the first place which also means they have parents".

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Bushhy

Status: chapter 113 world truth

Feb 16, 2023

It is a story well writhen, not many mistake's grammatically speaking.

Power levels are clear enough, world building set at 3, 5/ 5 stars, MC is a bit of an airhead, overpowered, leth say patient, a bit dark and carrying.

I really enjoied the storry, hope it gets better exposure . My final rating for the story is 4.6/ 5

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mrAlpha2020

Status: chapter 67: drama at home

Aug 22, 2023

Sincerily? Boring.

There's nothing to expect from romance, comedy, action, world-building, or character development.

The MC power is busted, the allied characters are all accepted as it is, and the enemies who from the start would be able to do nothing against the MC... suddenly become even more stupid than in Canon.

There's no hype for the MC thrashing the weaker foes, no hype in learning new things with the absurd amount of info-dumb, and no hype in something going wrong or having a plot twist; for the MC can just undo it with his power kk.

As for those grabbing this for the +18 content... well, nothing till chapter 67.

The only way for this to get interesting would be a strong, high-tier world, but with works like (chainsaw man + Demon Slayer + Highschool of the Dead + Jujutsu Kaisen), this is just a wish-realising work with a overly OP protagonist.

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Jin20

Status: --

Mar 24, 2024

The story had great premise, but lost it's value pretty much by now (HOTD arc)..

There are way to much infodump of how this power, that power works.. I'm not saying it's unnecessary, but you gotta prioritise how to show it to the audience without breaking the story immersion..

I don't see him enjoying any world honestly, which was his original goal.. He was just working from starting..

His personality is also nothing much tbh, like any other people of today's generation, indifferent to others unrelated..

He doesn't have what it takes to be grateful to the source of his power, the woman.. Yeah you can write it down like he is grateful for the women giving him power and will help her in war, but he's just indifferent to anything and everything..

He shed his human skin like in just a day after getting his power (where he thought to abandon the OC girl of Demon Slayer), has a god complex (yeah it might be not written that he isn't arrogant, but his personality and show of power just did that, even if he said to not call him God in HOTD arc)..

He's leaving HOTD world just because he can't get dream energy, like why? What's the rush for? The woman who gave the power said there's no rush, so why is he in such a rush? Just play Minecraft in HOTD world, get some chicks, go to beach, touch some grass, and be done with it when bored.. That's how you enjoy life mate..

Honestly I could read more but the monotonous life of MC get me put off from the immersion.. Like atleast write some "fluffy" chapters, get creative, make him play with chicks he had..

1st star for the idea of your story

2nd star for Grammar (even if there are a few spelling mistakes, but meh, no ones perfect)

3rd star for your hardwork (I might not like the story or MC but you did a good job to atleast writing it down)

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prognastat

Status: chapter 126: leaving tunisia

Jan 31, 2024

So boring.

Why is there so much useless exposition and pontificating?

Meanwhile everything else is lacking. All that wasted space could have been used for stuff people would actually want to read like:

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Character growth which there isn't (outside of power creep, but that's not the kind of growth we're talking about). Sure the character changes, but it isn't growth because for one he gets worse as it progresses and two he does so without actually any reason to do so he just suddenly behaves differently with 0 explanation which isn't character growth.

Interpersonal relationships are threadbare. How is it that 126 chapters in the MC in a harem story with a s*xual content warning has 1 girlfriends (no Shinobu and Nezuko don't count since there have been practically 0 scenes with relationship development and he even left them behind in the demon slayer world with barely a goodbye) and for that 1 girlfriend the most we have gotten is a timid peck on the lips. No described dates. Not detailed romance. Definitely nothing s*xual not even a little heavy petting let alone intercourse, not even of the fades to black variety.

If the romantic relationships are bad, the other relationships are worse and flatter than a cardboard cutout. I literally can't think of a single other character that has stood out in any way.

As for the action it's passable, but not all that good because it is often interrupted by MC getting distracted by pontificating about his skillset for paragraph upon paragraph in the middle of a fight. Ignoring that most fights the MC is so OP for that it has 0 stakes and the only reason he struggles in some of them is because he is holding back for some convoluted reason. His power effectively allows him to cheese everything. This can be done if the combat and powers aren't the real focus of the story or if it is done for comedic effect. However neither are the case here.

Bunch of time stuff that should be included is time skipped such as how the MC actually develops in a world. Like oh he meets some people bam time skip and he is the head of a national or possibly even international organisation. That's not the stuff you skip.

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And again why all the exposition and pontificating? Most of it doesn't actually influence or relate to the plot going on or could have been covered in 1/3rd of the time spent on it. If all of it got cut out the novel would be half as long and honestly it would be a better novel. Still having plenty of flaws, but it would be less bad. Around chapter 60 reading this started feeling like it was too much of a chore. I pushed through for another 60+ chapters and it just got worse and worse. I regret forcing myself to continue reading in hopes that things would turn around and start getting better rather than worse as it had been.

We don't need the MCs interpretation of how the world's power system works. Even less so when it doesn't actually have much if any point to the story. We don't need to have whole chapters of the MC internal monologuing about his thoughts on what he is going to do, what others are going to do, or what he has done. A little is fine, but there is way too much of it and it gets in the way of everything.

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LeBeater

Status: c210

Oct 12, 2023

Good story but the pacing is sometimes weird, like sometimes we have 1-2 just for a scene because the MC stops responding to a dialogue to start thinking. We also smetimes get useless paragraphs that just repeat the same things or chapters that just have less than useful infodumps. But it's a good story I love the powers of the MC, I like his interaction with his harem and I like the power system

I don't like his personality that much. I mean I like the whole "i do what I want when I want" thing but he seems to becoming more inhinged not that much but he seems to become more apathetic but I guess it comes with his powers maybe ? I like the fact that he helped Maki but I didnt like the interaction it seemed weird but ehh

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