So, I caught up to the most recent chapter (as of this moment), and gotta say, it's not a bad story. Like, sure, the MC is stupidly OP, but it's evident that, at least at this point, he wouldn't stand a chance against higher-tiered worlds like DxD, any Xianxia world, or any comic book world, and that he still has shortcomings that he needs to address. Plus, I really like that he doesn't just blindly pursue and drool over any beautiful woman and is actually willing to be patient and let things develop naturally. I also like that he has a few flaws, such as being really lazy and being pretty airheaded since it gives him a bit of character that's distinct from the MCs of other novels here.

Grammar-wise, it could use some work, but at least it's only amateurish and actually readable instead of looking like an MTL of a Chinese novel.

As for how the author handles his power, even though the restrictions felt rather contrived at the beginning, the author made some alright explanations for why those restrictions are what they are as the story progressed, and a lot of the restrictions and even his chaotic power progression are addressed at the JJK arc.

One major issue I have with novel though is the amount of chapters that are solely dedicated to exposition. Like sure, his power is really complicated and I do appreciate the explanations for how his powers work, but it's admittedly pretty tiring to read and also rather long-winded. Still, I guess it's not as bad as it could be.

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Nitsuga

Status: Whatever

Apr 11, 2024

I was reading this until I noticed that I was just scrolling at the speed of fast from how dull it is. MC's powers are under-utilized and then instantly amazing the next like a CH novel about face slapping. Author put so much infodump that the info that was important to character progression got buried by unecessary stuff. 1★ is me being generous. I honestly dont trust anyone who can give 3★ to this, let alone 5★.

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