3.5 star

The story itself have a very good plot, but the writing is very jumpy, although it not all over the place, it did switch perspective a lot.

Sometimes you read 2 character talking, the next, paragraph switch to 1 of them talking to someone else, in a different place, without concluding the first. Or switch to 1 of the character already engage in a fight with a different character without introducing how them even met.

Expect a lot of skipping, and It will be like you only reading a body paragraph without reaching conclusion nor introduction half of the time.

One more thing that irk me is that, everyone seem to know who the MC was, it to the point where, It feel similar to how Chinese story always had all the MC action known to everyone even to someone unrelated to what going on. It not important in this story, but it just irk me.

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