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Focused Fire (ATLA)
Focused Fire (ATLA)
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The rise of a young Fire Nation commander Xing, a survivor of a village attack-turned prodigious firebending colonel of the Fire Nation's 11th Regiment.

Taking place not long before canon, Xing seeks to keep his adoptive family in the Fire Nation military as safe, sound, and sharp as he can, even as the pieces of the puzzle that is the main story start to fall in place around him, the biggest of which is Princess Azula joining the 11th in their military duties around the Earth Kingdom.

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ActionAdultFanfictionFantasyHaremIsekai
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Avatar: The Last Airbender
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Table of Contents 148
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  1. A glimpse of the far futureJan 11, 2024
  2. A glimpse of the future (2)Dec 28, 2023
  3. A glimpse of the futureDec 15, 2023
  4. ReunionDec 5, 2023
  5. Chapter 140Nov 23, 2023
  6. Chapter 139Nov 21, 2023
  7. Chapter 138Nov 19, 2023
  8. Chapter 137Nov 17, 2023
  9. Chapter 136Nov 15, 2023
  10. Chapter 135Nov 13, 2023
  11. Chapter 134Nov 11, 2023
  12. Chapter 133Nov 8, 2023
  13. Chapter 132Nov 7, 2023
  14. Chapter 131Nov 5, 2023
  15. Chapter 130Nov 3, 2023
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      Meowsickles
      Status: a glimpse of the far...

      Extremely well written. I’ve read it three times now and enjoyed every read.

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      jellyfish666
      Status: chapter 43

      The one and only Masterpiece ATLA fiction. This sh*t needs more recognition. Nuff said

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      Digheads
      Status: chapter 140

      Main plot complete as of this chapter (140). Only side stories/plots left.

      This is a great written work! A bit gory at times but not excessively so considering the context of war. It is satisfying  to see the character changes occur from the original plot in a believable way. MC is OP, but not because he is the strongest. If you would like to see a more grounded approach to the warfare and politics in Avatar, then this is your jam.

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      Baumbarth
      Status: chapter 123

      This is a great story that uses less relevant characters and OCs to great effect. Things alternate between dark and wholesome regularly. 

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      Hantaros
      Status: c48

      This is one of the best as far as fanfics go, but the MC is a bit of a Mary Sue: he never loses (even when he’s forced to retreat he somehow comes out looking good) and basically all character POVs mention how incredible/terrifying he is, it’s not unrealistic for the setting though, Avatar is full kids who surpass master combatants in a short time (Katara is the worst offender who goes from self taught amateur to the strongest water bender in a year), the MC is one such genius who has been busting his ass in preparation years before the main storyline

      PS: Xing doesn’t care about canon and as of chapter 48 is indirectly keeping Aang at bay so that there’s no interference on his pl

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      Bustacap
      Status: a glimpse of the far...

      This was an accidental find but man do I regret binge reading it in like 2 days uggh. I highly recommend this book, the intruige, character interactions, plots and side stories are FANTASTICALLY done and don't leave you disappointed. The ending feels a quick, I would have loved to have read and seen more about the future but it leaves me imagining what could have happened so I guess it'll have to make due. Definitely looking forward to more stories from thus author, keep it up!

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      Id13
      Status: a glimpse of the far...

      Very enjoyable reading, I was so taken that I read it all in one go and will certainly read it again later :)

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