Great story so far !

For me capture target is on of the best R18 serie on SH!

If Corruption and gender bender are your thing READ IT.

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Great Gender Bender and Corruption but the style doesn't do it for me. 

One is getting the past narrated as if explained which in turn makes it lack dialogues severely and also many details may be missed when the focus isn't on them. This mostly makes the characters and background lack depth. 

The focus is often on the absurd world, s*x and states of mind so it is not really bad. However just like body modification with four tits on another character is not my thing, so ain't repeated preaching about s*xism and constant lack of dialogue. 

They are not severe (not love interest?, short and YMMV on the narration), for me it becomes a turn off / I put the book away because the narration is a constant I couldn't bear for longer.

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I give this masterpiece This is not enough out of I need more. Funny and interesting worldbuilding, my favourite kinks and no end to the escalation of hotness. Although I would be happy to see the h-scenes stretched longer.

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It's great, it'll be complete in 20 updates, that are available on the author's subscribestar page, and I personally love the first chapter, because it lists out exactly what kinks to expect in the length of the story.  if you're interested in a story where the main character is really into all the kinky stuff that happens to her, and is proud of it! While having a surprisingly deep lore and cosmology you're in for a treat.

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Definitely a 9.7/10 at minimum, it has great storytelling and story-line, it is not as confusing as some of the other stories of its genre, and most of all its a fun read.

-Would Recommend

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Really incredible! The narration, as told by the MC, ends up as a really fun rhetorical device and color to how the story is told. It's always hugely important thematically (her perspective and how its shifted), and is just not something I see often. The only downside is I occasionally forget the MC's name, then desperately remember two different parts of it (Ambrosia, Elizabeth) and confuse myself on which one is correct 😆. It doesn't hinder my reading anyway though, in the style that it's presented.

I was so pleasantly surprised by the importance placed onto consent, and the attention it pays to how each character feels. It's a deeply human analogue to a story like Corruptions of Champions, one that's quite a bit funnier and fluffier. The level of detail to make a scene feel vivid is still there, and the smut is sometimes hot - when it's not just a recurrent joke (which is still usually quite funny anyway).

I really adore the voice of the story, both the presentation and MC's, but also in that every other character has felt substantially different. There's quite a well rounded cast of characters that are rarely not incredibly entertaining. I really look forward to new chapters of this! ❤️

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A friend suggested this story to me based on some of my various kinks, and I am extremely glad he did! I absolutely adore the author's near manic style of fourth wall breaks! I fell in love with her antics and the way she describes everything in a way that often had me literally laughing out loud. While the style of writing can be confusing for those without ADHD, for me, it was pure bliss! I found a kindred soul that loves to flit from one topic to the next just as much as I do! The s*x scenes are well composed, albeit a tad less descriptive than I usually like, but with the MC's brain jumping from one thing to the next, it made sense for the story. So far I have had several of my kinks show up, and just based on what I've skimmed through in the upcoming chapters, I will get to enjoy even more depravity! 

This story is smut with a plot, but I love the way that the smut is so intertwined with all the s*xy goodness! It handles some of the darker things in a way that makes sense for the story, without making the setting too grim. 

As I'm writing this, I'm realizing that this is probably the first one of these that I've written... So, hopefully this is enough to say, if you are looking for a hilarious, crazy, s*xy good read from an author who isn't afraid to shine a light on every dirty little kink we can think of, you should definitely check it out! The only, ONLY disappointing thing is that I discovered today that the story does come to an end. 

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Much like the game series the protagonist played, this is a smut story with a surprising amount of lore and depth.

I just absolutely love our unreliable narrator and the way she talks to the audience about what happened.  It's a unique setup that was done quite well.  Unfortunately, the story method and the protagonists strong personality cause most of the other characters to have far less depth in comparison.

Just like the game reviews in the extra chapters, the various kinks presented my not be for everyone's tastes.  But for those who can look past what may not be their thing, there is a quality epic adventure (with lots of s*x) to enjoy.

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