I really like the story so far. The main character's ghoul powers match her slightly crazy personality, which I think is well done. The grammar is good, and the flow of the chapters is smooth. I appreciate the povs because they allow readers to experience the perspective of her victims, and help  understand that even though her  personality seems alittle goofy in first person, others perceive her as very dangerous.

I can't say much about the world, as it appears to be a fairly generic superpower world at this point. However, since this is only the beginning of the story (hopefully), the author's skill in storytelling makes it interesting regardless. The story has not felt boring at any point so far, and the chapter length is appropriate.

Overall, I've enjoyed the story up until now, and I'm looking forward to reading more in the future. Who doesn't like the friendly neighborhood clown cannibal?

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I like this story a lot the writer has this chaotic energy about them that connects well with the main character pair that with their great writing and their interactions with their readers I’d say this is one the best stories I’ve read

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the structure reminds me a lot of a stereotypical korean novel. Where the initial idea and build-up is generally interesting then it slowly comes to stagnation and stale in the middle before it gets a rushed/unfinished ending. It was such a shame really because there are still a lot of plots either abandoned or coming to a hasty conclusion. Anyway here is what I think of the novel till the very end.

1. The world building

Well, given it is fan fiction then it come as no surprise that it will be a whole lot easier to understand what's happening if people know the original story beforehand especially given this novel take a lot of the world-building directly from the original (mostly the worm, not so much of the tokyo ghoul). Because of that, for worm fans, it would be a familiar and enjoyable read because it is like returning to the old village during a vacation. There are some references for tokyo ghoul fans that are not so subtle, but tokyo ghoul part is taking a back seat in terms of world-building and frankly, that is fine by me because tokyo ghoul's world-building is not necessarily interesting in my opinion.

2. The story

As I already briefly mentioned, the story's initial development was pretty fun to read (except with quite a blatant copy-paste of the tokyo ghoul part) which unfortunately doesn't last until the start of the so-called "arc two" where things come to stagnation which mean it is all a rinse and repeat endless violence and gore for the sake of chaos. This mindless violence and gore finally come to a stretching halt by a hastily put ending which leaves a lot of plots hanging, abandoned, or unfinished and cause quite an unsatisfactory conclusion to the tale of a very entertaining main character.

3. The characters

The original characters that were introduced early in the story are generally quite well-written and have their traits and personalities while the characters from the original novels blend quite well with the new characters. Because of that in terms of the characters' interaction, I consider it to be very smooth and enjoyable. Unfortunately, as I already mentioned above about how the story degrades over time, the same can be applied to the later characters being introduced either due to being one-dimensional or lacking enough time to develop meaningful interaction. There is an exception to this situation which is the main character who remain pretty consistent and entertaining throughout the story even though she was dealt with a pretty bad pair of cards by the end of the story.

4. Language

There are a lot of typos, spelling errors, and other typical mistakes in hastily written stories which can admittedly be pretty jarring for people who are looking for a proper read instead of an average amateurish written story. This issue doesn't bother me on a personal level because my understanding of english language is merely passable enough to read and hold daily conversations thus I don't have enough knowledge to be nitpicky about it and merely mention it for readers of this review.

Overall, it was an enjoyable read and one of the rare few stories on this site that have an actual ending despite being unfinished, and because of that, I enjoy my time reading this nonetheless. I'm looking forward to what the author can do with the sequel (unfortunately on hiatus by the time this review was written).

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It ultimately gets really samey. I enjoyed as far as I read, but it's felt really.... Static. Which is really funny, because at one point the protagonist accuses Jack Slash of being mildly amusing at first, but ultimately boring, because it's just violence violence violence all the time. This fic has that problem, just in general. Also, the slaughterhouse 9 arc is way too long.

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The story story started off well then fell into the typical copy paste kankei/Jason chapter. The story felt really stagnant after that. The S9 arc was somewhat interesting but it went on for far too long. Over all it just got boring for me. 

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So, let me start, if you don't like gore, manipulation and killing innocents, then you probably won't like this story, you are free to go read something boring or whatever you are usually reading[kidding, every one has its own preferences].

Be ready for black humour~

But for real, you won't like this if you hate these things, oh and cannibalism, I forgot to mention it :P 

But coming back to my review... I started reading this story when it had like 60+ chapters (I think, I don't remember precisely it could be earlier or a little later)  

and from the first chapter I was bough,

through the story Lusia (mc) grows from sh*tless chick to boogeyman (boogeywomen?) that is feared by most of the people

Other characters are also well written, with time they grew on me, so when

The "family" relationship between

Ok, so the worst part was the reference to Tokyo Ghoul (not the power, it is good, I mean

The thing that I am the most disappointed is

Summarizing in numbers: Mc:10/10; Other characters:9/10; Plot:9/10; Gramma:8/10 (there are mistakes, but not severe enough to be a problem for reading).

How much I was enjoying this story:100/10!

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