Youth is a lie, yet cake isn't.
Let me explain: there comes a time in the life of a young man when he'll be unavoidably faced with temptation. It may take plenty of forms, yet most of them will be easily resisted. Underage drinking? Smoking? Skipping classes? All those activities are easily discovered, with well-established punishments any moderately intelligent (that is: brilliant by comparison) young man would rather avoid.
But! If, for instance, a gorgeous, often violent, Christmas Cake would break down in a tearful plea for somebody to take her? Would the same steadfast, reasonable, logical, and really handsome young man be able to resist the temptation? I challenge anyone to state they would. Nobody's that much into dieting.
Somehow, this is totally Oregairu, the writing and way of Hachiman thinking is just the best (and a bit of monogatari, lol)
Well, I have no more than one thing to criticize (at least, until te chapter I've read -C41-,
and is that looks that you're creating a couple inside a polygamous relationship, Shizu and Haruno just feel like a couple every time they are together, that's different from, for example, Hachi and Iroha, that they still thinking at Shizu, even when it was Iroha's first time
I don't know if you fix it later, but I hope so (sorry if you can't understand everything, english is not my first language)
Dude, how do I put stars?
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This fanfic has many NSFW scenes about Teen Romantic Comedy SNAFU that I enjoyed reading about.
The first chapter occurs during episode 5 of Teen Romantic Comedy SNAFU Climax! where instead of a comedic moment leading to Hachiman going back to the Service Club, Hachiman logically goes after best girl and kisses her. And the rest of the story follows the what-if scenario.
The paragraphs of inner monologue from Hachiman are reminiscent of the anime, lending itself well to anime viewer fans.
Each chapter is pretty long, and the s*x scenes are slightly stimulating. Unfortunately, I cannot say whether the s*x scenes are stimulating enough for readers to reach climax.
The story contains many references to other media that readers may not understand. I missed a few of these, but they do not interfere with the story.
Fans that are not repulsed by Hachiman x Hiratsuka x Iroha should read this story. I am not sure if more girls join the throuple, but I am enjoying the story as it is.
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