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Somehow, this is totally Oregairu, the writing and way of Hachiman thinking is just the best (and a bit of monogatari, lol)
Well, I have no more than one thing to criticize (at least, until te chapter I've read -C41-,
and is that looks that you're creating a couple inside a polygamous relationship, Shizu and Haruno just feel like a couple every time they are together, that's different from, for example, Hachi and Iroha, that they still thinking at Shizu, even when it was Iroha's first time
I don't know if you fix it later, but I hope so (sorry if you can't understand everything, english is not my first language)
Dude, how do I put stars?
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This fanfic has many NSFW scenes about Teen Romantic Comedy SNAFU that I enjoyed reading about.
The first chapter occurs during episode 5 of Teen Romantic Comedy SNAFU Climax! where instead of a comedic moment leading to Hachiman going back to the Service Club, Hachiman logically goes after best girl and kisses her. And the rest of the story follows the what-if scenario.
The paragraphs of inner monologue from Hachiman are reminiscent of the anime, lending itself well to anime viewer fans.
Each chapter is pretty long, and the s*x scenes are slightly stimulating. Unfortunately, I cannot say whether the s*x scenes are stimulating enough for readers to reach climax.
The story contains many references to other media that readers may not understand. I missed a few of these, but they do not interfere with the story.
Fans that are not repulsed by Hachiman x Hiratsuka x Iroha should read this story. I am not sure if more girls join the throuple, but I am enjoying the story as it is.
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