A young man finally managed to become an immortal, a powerful cultivator able to lord over millions of souls. He took advantage of his tremendous luck and fortune to become the youngest immortal in history. He now wants to create his own sect and enjoy life, one filled with female disciples!
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It's decent, I guess? I quite enjoy it but I gotta admit that there's some plot holes as well as personality and character development issues. If anyone wanna give it a try, then read the novel with an open mind and don't be too critical to point out its flaws.
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When you read a harem novel you find several personality defects or you are not entirely satisfied with the MC, and although this MC is not the best I have read it may be in the top 10 so if you are looking for a harem story where the MC is not:
1. Dense, no high emotional quotient
2. Shy and indecisive
3. Reckless and brainless
this novel is not for you, but if you give it a chance you will get caught up in this good story
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Good story progression. At first there were some stupid characters and their actions, but author improved on this.
Characters actually are not ret*rds like in almost all other novels, in which they only see one way of improving yourself: fight for resources and find cultivation techniques. They dvelve by themselves on their cultivation path, try to invent cultivation techniques and use unorthodox methods to achieve that.
Love stories are good, women have different life circumstances and MC is taking that into consideration.
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The best cultivation novel I have ever read, all his woman have different personalities and the interaction between his disciple is pretty lovely (especially the s*x scenes ?)
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High quality writing, nuff said.
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AUTHOR this is soooo freaking good !
I mean this brings together story telling, world building, r18, developing of relationships with harem all together.... it is a great story and encompasses alot of different aspects together. My only problem is that its hard to find novels like this!
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I enjoyed it alot.I just have two complaints. First there are way too many rape scenes (no ntr) and second MC barely focuses on his own cultivation. Other than that it was a really good read.
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Everything is good females get good character development, background story's, uniqueness, personality difference etc but I complain about MC development I understand MC has struggled to become immortal and had suffered to much due to his secret treasures and techniques but even after becoming immortal he is just some small character in this so much bigger world which is hinted in this novel MC has technique which has so much potential but is still stuck in low rug story also I not slow and personally I like this pace not slow not fast and filled with good stuck along with some good action and story and character development but if you go like this you will have trouble in future because by then MC would have got too many female companions and will not be given much time for everyone and MC himself already have smallest growth what will happen then
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i quite like it so 4 stars! 5 stars if there will be a comic. If there is a comic someone show me thnx :)
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