1. Too many fandoms mixed together without proper explanation. If you are not familiar with those fanfoms you will not be able to understand what is going on.

2. The way mc's powers work seems to change several times but MC acts like it always worked this way.

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nah This story is a mess...  average...  mix world is completely illogical with lot of completly different power system existing at the same time somehow able to hide from normal public without any weirdness.....  

story is written weirdly as I got confuse many times that whose p.o.v is going on....  

also author added some very very less popular manga in the mix world but while introducing characters he doesn't give explanation or introduction of that novel or story.. not even name.. p.o.v is also very confusing..

 so I totally don't like the mix world...  I like mix world of other fanfiction but sadly this one is done very badly and author had chosen very very non-copatible global powersystem ..  nothing make sense now....   hell  MC found out this world is also jujutsu kaisan world  and his reaction was just 1 sentence:- "That's why I am cautious"   and than it's never even mentioned....  unless suddenly attacked by a curse  or a demon....

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Danmachi is the worst world you can go to; it's boring, and everything you do there is boring. Leveling up is also boring; the dungeon is boring, and it's so predictable. I hope you can rewrite it to go to a world that has not been used so much in fanfic novels."

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Too much fighting magic nonsense for my taste. I quite liked the first arc but after that it was like I was dropped in verbal vomit and I tuned out.

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1. Author mash up anime including their power system that it make it confusing

2. Was expecting it to only be in the modern world but as it goes to danmachi world it kinda become boring only thing makes me read it is for bocchi.

3. His cheat was so confusing at the start I dont even know whats happening anymore at the early arc I just continued reading it. 

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The novel isn't bad but it isn't good either. The author mashes a lot of different mechanics and clichés together. The story in my opinion is very wishy washy and too fast paced. By the fifteenth chapter the main character has become involved in three different areas and 3 different worlds/Fandoms. It's honestly lackluster because it isn't all that expanded upon or fleshed out properly. It's like seeing a nice meaty steak from far away only when the steak is brought up to you. You realize how average it looks then when you eat it, it tastes even worse than it looks. All in all. Poor pacing, lackluster character development of the MC and side characters, the narrative and world building is ok to bad, and finally any plot point changes are abruptly introduced not gradually worked in giving a really jarring and why the f**k did that just happen? Imo it deserves a 2 star at best if not for it's good grammar and spellchecking. 

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I'm not that good at writing reviews but I'll try my best.

This is something I didn't expect after reading the title, the MC is very very well balanced, this is NOT a 'system' fic if the title makes you think so. Although yes, he has something that's special to him but no, he does not become completely overpowered. Heck! I'd say that the 'cheat' is as much of a curse as it is a blessing.

The MC has to prepare and train to fight the various enemies he'll face, he also does this by making various allies and supporting and preparing them to face the threats with him. (I.e, characters aren't one-dimensional, and he changes the story quite a bit) and oh my god Nobu has actual character development that perfectly suits his character I've never been so damn happy.

One of my complaints would be the MC's age and how characters seem to completely disregard it in some scenarios. 

The world background is explained fairly reasonably, although, as fanfiction we really can't ask the author to explain the entire original work here.

One thing I'd mention though, is that the text reads in such a way that you'd expect of translated Japanese light novels, not very amazing prose.

The main problem I have with the novel is that the author is trying to mix in mystery about the character in what reads like an adventure fantasy, there's absolutely no buildup when they try that and it's just 'oh! MC can do/has done this now'.  Suuure the bit about his origins etc was passable but the others? Nah the story works in a way that you do not find and buildup/mystery to it and it feels like coming out of nowhere.

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Around a 4, (Made at chapter 63)

So I went into this story honestly expecting it similar to the Authors other work "A Foreigner's Chat Group" (Good story), but with a lower power level. It sounded fun, but it wasn't exactly that, but I like what is here, much more than expectation were for it. 

The story has been fun.

Focusing on only two worlds currently, which has been a good thing. MCs home world which is a mix of a few different ones, which is also a totally peaceful place... Before switching to Danmachi with occasional glimpses back home.

MC is fun, and the development he has had so far has been interesting. With it starting pretty light-hearted before the reveals to show what he truly is up against. 

I'm not exactly sure what else to say. Don't want to spoil too much after all. I've liked some of the side characters, basically all of the interesting ones have appeared during Danmachi, which is just mostly due to it being the longer arc so more time to interact with the supporting cast.

So I'll just say this, I've enjoyed it. It has been good fun, and there isn't too many chapters so far, so give it a try?

Maybe I'll add more to this review, when I can think of more to say...

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