I can see this is the author first time writing a novel since he/she literally makes the whole chapter from 1-10 feel like an experiment for the author. But it's getting better and more consistent along the way. The story is your generic secret organization...? But this time, the MC is kind of like a vigilante instead.
I like it so far. Nothing to note off. Except the fact that I got attached more to the side character than the actual MC
Strange inhuman writing (The type of errors/omissions a chatbot/google translate would make), a MC whos powers are so over the top they harm the narrative, and a distasteful rendition of the 'insane' MC trope that is just plain grading. This story just makes for some sub par reading material if you don't end up caring for the protagonist.
I can see this is the author first time writing a novel since he/she literally makes the whole chapter from 1-10 feel like an experiment for the author. But it's getting better and more consistent along the way. The story is your generic secret organization...? But this time, the MC is kind of like a vigilante instead.
I like it so far. Nothing to note off. Except the fact that I got attached more to the side character than the actual MC
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Strange inhuman writing (The type of errors/omissions a chatbot/google translate would make), a MC whos powers are so over the top they harm the narrative, and a distasteful rendition of the 'insane' MC trope that is just plain grading. This story just makes for some sub par reading material if you don't end up caring for the protagonist.
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