Cute story and a lot of character interactions. The world-building is rather lacking but that is due to the limited chapter currently. I mean, even minor, basic, background, dead-in-two-sentence villains get a tiny story. There is really nothing to criticize aside from really really minor word mix-ups and grammatical issues. I kinda like the non formal way of writing with WSBHJNEFBIWUAL to symbolize the guy waking up :D
I- lost her… I lost everything…
That was the day when she died, when my sister, Kana, died.
Reiko Kestui’s parents died when he was 16, leaving her only family member Kana. Kana, however, was very ill, she didnR
Cute story and a lot of character interactions. The world-building is rather lacking but that is due to the limited chapter currently. I mean, even minor, basic, background, dead-in-two-sentence villains get a tiny story. There is really nothing to criticize aside from really really minor word mix-ups and grammatical issues. I kinda like the non formal way of writing with WSBHJNEFBIWUAL to symbolize the guy waking up :D
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