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It's good, I'm enjoying this kinda story. Experienced veteran that never tired or satisfied with his/her life. Looking forward to this.
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The author tries to show intelligence by using complicated words, but unfortunately, there are too many. What ends up spoiling the narration, The protagonist is not attractive, he looks arrogant, too sure of himself, too convinced of his superiority, the moments where we expect him to show some emotions, He is convinced of this greatness. It was strange that before he died he told his son that he was proud but almost ignored that girl, it's strange, we have the impression that he is missing some things where he is an asshole. He was reborn and did not think of them. He didn't feel any hesitation or fear when he injected himself with the virus, as if he was too great for everyone, in short, the narration managed to convey only his genius, nothing else. While the idea behind the story is really great, the potential is enormous, If you manage to get past his attitude, the story is good
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It's an interesting read but it has what I feel to be a problem of idk how to describe it but bloated descriptions. Lots of big intelligent sounding words but you can only use so many of them before it starts sounding repetitive and headache inducing idk people just read some of it you either will notice or not, my "hot take" on this just read it it's got and interesting storyline so far
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