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*Part of a review swap*
An interesting take on the universe-hopping MC genre, with each universe being a different game. A great way to pay tribute to a bunch of games. So far, I like the MC's deadpan personality, but I find his 'mother' somewhat of a nuisance.
The writing is simple, in some parts straight up stating things in a very basic way that is much more 'tell, don't show', and some of the punctuation could do with work. I would recommend a revision of the story to make the writing richer - I think the story concept is great, so it would be good to bring the writing up to the same level.
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It was first time reading fanfiction based on game so I was very thrilled to read.
But later end of the 1st world things got boring because of mc's naive character and zero knowledge about combat and power. It was suppose to be a short mission but MC throws all cautiousness and jump to fight and meddle someone else problem which lead to long fillers of wasteful chapters (may be just me).
MC have no sense of secrecy he show off.
Anyway, system is too op.
These all are negativity I can think of.
About positive, I like this was unique fanfiction and author gave good background for gifts MC got and all.
If not for the boring MC and his idiocracy then I would have given 5 stars.
Hope author will improve character development. Thanks
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Thanks for the good story author ( ꈍᴗꈍ) Keep up the good work 🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪🍪
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