This is a very fun story. It is a fanfic so many things are changed. MC is a guy planning to do things his own way.
I am not fond of where he picks up members from another crew. I would have preferred for entire crews to instead follow him or join as subordinates etc. But that is just a difference of my personal opinion the writing is still great. I do believe this deserves the current rating.
If people can be so happy with the Netflix series then just relax and enjoy this fanfic as well. :-p
I've tried so hard to read through this but it's clear no proofreading is ever done to any chapters after chapter 1. FIrst of all, it's not bad. There are some inconsistencies that aren't explained like Kuina being alive or how Luffy completely changes and no one asks questions but there are some stuff that are just weird. Like when Luffy took out Buggys crew and then said he wants to touch himself OUT OF NOWHERE.
The worst issue in reading this is the grammar and spelling. It's bad. I struggled through in hopes of it improving but it's quite the opposite. It's been getting worse and worse, chapter 1 is probably the most legible out of all the chapters because the author most likely made an effort to proofread it and fix the mistakes. After that, no proofreading is done at all and it is quite obvious. There are too many obvious mistakes that could've been fixed if it was read over even just once. From misspellings plaguing each chapter to even at times incomplete sentences. All could have been avoided if they actually put it in the effort to proofread rather than churn out chapter after chapter.
I tried. But nah this is one of those ''Transmigrated as Luffy and I'll things my way'' wish fulfillment novel. I had great expectation especially how the writer took time to train kid Luffy but that's pretty much it.
We have a slightly narcisstic MC who has a similar way of speaking like Luffy but with a tone of over confidence. He adds random people to join the crew, which obviously gonna go to sh*t unless you are Oda. Kuina is somehow alive, which means a great deal of Zoro's character building should've been non existent, yet we see no change in Zoro.
Guess it isn't a big deal, considering Zoro is just another character in the crew. There is no chemistry between them considering Luffy is showboating half of the time, The problem with adding new crewmembers is that the writer has to build them from scratch, which takes a lot of time, extra enemies to be created to fight them and most of all, the Merry Go itself won't sustain. Oh yeah, Nami is a semi pervert out of nowhere too.
The thing which baffles me is that, the MC has the knowledge of events until Wano and yet we don't see a good story to build upon. It is good for you everyday self fulfillment trope tho
The universe gave me another chance after life screwed me over. My second life brought me to a world where people breath fire, walk on water and some people with special eyes that give them bullsh#t powers. Well, I got the gamer ability. And I’m g
The opening of Pandora’s Box changed the world, giving rise to an age of superhumans and monsters. Yet mankind was not safe from its own hubris, and in the end, it destroyed itself. It’s the end of the world, but Sonya Chernovna has be
‘Where… am I…?’
He awoke, surrounded by an overwhelming green that enveloped his body, with no memories as to how he got there or where he was. The boy twisted and writhed his body with spasms as he tried to escape b
This is a very fun story. It is a fanfic so many things are changed. MC is a guy planning to do things his own way.
I am not fond of where he picks up members from another crew. I would have preferred for entire crews to instead follow him or join as subordinates etc. But that is just a difference of my personal opinion the writing is still great. I do believe this deserves the current rating.
If people can be so happy with the Netflix series then just relax and enjoy this fanfic as well. :-p
Author is writing pretty nicely so far.
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I've tried so hard to read through this but it's clear no proofreading is ever done to any chapters after chapter 1. FIrst of all, it's not bad. There are some inconsistencies that aren't explained like Kuina being alive or how Luffy completely changes and no one asks questions but there are some stuff that are just weird. Like when Luffy took out Buggys crew and then said he wants to touch himself OUT OF NOWHERE.
The worst issue in reading this is the grammar and spelling. It's bad. I struggled through in hopes of it improving but it's quite the opposite. It's been getting worse and worse, chapter 1 is probably the most legible out of all the chapters because the author most likely made an effort to proofread it and fix the mistakes. After that, no proofreading is done at all and it is quite obvious. There are too many obvious mistakes that could've been fixed if it was read over even just once. From misspellings plaguing each chapter to even at times incomplete sentences. All could have been avoided if they actually put it in the effort to proofread rather than churn out chapter after chapter.
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Fun story.
Can't wait to read the rest
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Trolling your grampa when he is Garp will be a very painful thing more so knowing the story
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I tried. But nah this is one of those ''Transmigrated as Luffy and I'll things my way'' wish fulfillment novel. I had great expectation especially how the writer took time to train kid Luffy but that's pretty much it.
We have a slightly narcisstic MC who has a similar way of speaking like Luffy but with a tone of over confidence. He adds random people to join the crew, which obviously gonna go to sh*t unless you are Oda. Kuina is somehow alive, which means a great deal of Zoro's character building should've been non existent, yet we see no change in Zoro.
Guess it isn't a big deal, considering Zoro is just another character in the crew. There is no chemistry between them considering Luffy is showboating half of the time, The problem with adding new crewmembers is that the writer has to build them from scratch, which takes a lot of time, extra enemies to be created to fight them and most of all, the Merry Go itself won't sustain. Oh yeah, Nami is a semi pervert out of nowhere too.
The thing which baffles me is that, the MC has the knowledge of events until Wano and yet we don't see a good story to build upon. It is good for you everyday self fulfillment trope tho
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