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I can't really say anything nice about the MC, maybe he changes for the better in the later chapters, but, I can't stand the MC anymore.
The reason is that he acts like a spoiled child from the start, he is told information at the start that would be useful to him, but just ignores it because oooh no he too good for that. So he ignores it, and guess what, he gets mad because he doesn't know something that he would have know had he just listened from the start... This a person who is supposed to have gone to college btw. There are other stuff he does early one that make me question his thinking prowess, but that would be entering spoiler territory.
There is also the way characters interact with him. Woman love him at first chat/interaction, and Men are either in awe or jealous of him. It's just sallow.
His powers are super OP, so if he just listened he would have done everyone a favor by not acting like a child that didn't get the new toy they wanted. And the MC would be much happier.
The premise of the story is nice, and honestly I would read it more of the MC was just more likable. He gets thrown into the future and has to start from zero, he has to survive ina world thats familiar but aways removed from anything he knows. Its honestly a good start that doesn't overwhelmed the reader with a bigger than life premise.
And no I'm not expecting a 'holier than thou' MC, but what I am expecting is a person who has gone to college and has the reasoning abilities of someone his age. Not a kid in an adults' body.
Maybe it gets better, maybe not.
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