[Excellent value for money, would come again. My bones felt rejuvenated and strengthened. Ainz Ooal Gown shall never know defeat!]
- Lord of the Great Tomb of Nazarick.
10/10.
[Never had I felt anything so pleasurable. I'm writing this feedback at the request of my beloved Ray, but if you dare come to take any of his massages, especially if you're a woman, blonde with big boobs, annoying bitch... I, Esdeath, will gut you alive and freeze you, mark my words!]
- High-ranked Frozen General of the Empire.
10/10.
[Excellent service, miraculous hands... my only complaint is the eccentric people I've had to bear within the queue. Some of the people coming for Ray-sama's service are really messed up in the head. Other than that, absolutely would come again, Ray-sama!~]
- Spirit of Time, Nightmare.
10/10
[As long as I don't have to share space with that bitch Esdeath, everything is perfect. Ray's hands make me feel like I'm back in my childhood with flawless innocence. Aside from that, every time I take one of his massages and sem-*cough* I go to the casino and I win! I'm on a streak! Ray, stop wasting time and make me exclusive!]
- Konohagakure's Slug Sannin.
10/10.
[I'm a hero just for fun still waiting for my hair miracle treatment, good food giveaways in the queue, nine stars]
- Self-proclaimed Hero, Baldy.
9/10.
[A man giving massages?! I was expecting a beautiful busty girl on the other side of the curtain! and what's with all these pretty ladies in the queue, it should be me! Absolute disappointment, I, your majesty Kazuma, will never come back to this shit-hole!]
- Below Average Adventurer, Guinness Record of most useless death in the Universe.
1/10.
[Don't pay attention to the useless guy above me, he's just jealous. Ray-chan I love you and your hands, more your hands than you but I love you!]
- Below Average Goddess of Water, Guinness Record of most useless Goddess in the Universe.
11/10.
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Homeworld: High School DxD.
Tags: Adventure, Romance, Harem, Demons, Strong-to-Stronger, System, Multiverse, School-Life, Slice-of-life.
Up to 20 advanced chapters in Patreon.
- The New World17 hours ago
- Feelings (+17)Jun 4, 2024
- Tight Little Boundaries (+17)Jun 2, 2024
- Childhood Sweethearts IIIMay 28, 2024
- Childhood Sweethearts IIMay 26, 2024
- Childhood Sweethearts IMay 24, 2024
- Loose Ends IIIMay 23, 2024
- Loose Ends IIMay 22, 2024
- Loose Ends IMay 21, 2024
- TransdimensionalMay 20, 2024
- True GodMay 17, 2024
- Diplomacy, Moving On.May 15, 2024
- Upheaval IIMay 14, 2024
- Upheaval IMay 13, 2024
- Metamorphosis IIMay 12, 2024
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Public Domain- Ongoing - Updated 17 hours ago
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great story! Love the slice of life and the soft core bits in the beginning
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This is my first review on this site, so I apologize if it's lacking in any way.
It's a decent story with a great premise, it severe editing though. Grammar, spelling, format (the author says so themselves in a comment) and most of all consistency need to be improved.
1) the main character lost his clothing in a fight against opponent, and suddenly everyone acted as if he was miraculously dressed again
2) previously discussed important points are rediscussed during later conversations as if the previous conversation had never happened
3) the entire story (up to where I stopped) is formatted for web novel, the author never went back and fixed this issue and even as end of chapter announcements from the webnovel version
Overall, I think this is a decent story with great potential, just needs a little bit of work to smooth out the rough spots.
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