A man is reincarnated in the Mass Effect Universe. At first, he was kinda scared about the possibility of dying to the Reapers, or other dangers across the huge galaxy. But, he persevered and, after making friends with Shepard and the crew, won the final battle.
He was happy and thrilled about the possibilities of his new life after the war. But, on the day he turned 28 years old, he returned back in time, to when he was a baby.
He was confused and mortified by the weird situation, but, our MC didn't let that shake his confidence. So, he tackled the plot of the game once more. But, again, after he turned 28, he returned in time. He finally had to admit to himself he was trapped in some sort of time loop but decided to continue ahead with his life(s). The problem was, this didn't happen just once.
2 times, 3 times, 4 times, 5 times... 9 times. It slowly changed him, to the point he lost the will to try after a few cycles. He realized what he was doing was meaningless, because no matter what he did, the changes he made, nothing mattered, as he would be thrown back in time anyway. So, he deviated from the plot and started to study a variety of things and he didn't care about the fate of the galaxy anymore.
In those subsequent loops, he managed to become a master/expert in a lot of things, but the time loop never changed, and the MC started to lose hope of living a normal life.
But, after the 9 loop, he felt something different from the other cycles! Perhaps this is his final one?
Follow along and watch our MC conquer the whole galaxy, fighting the dangers inside it, and possibly getting a few girls along the way!
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Release schedule: 3 chapters a week (Monday, Wednesday and Saturday), as long as I have enough chapters in stock. Otherwise, 2 chapters per week (Wednesday and Saturday)
Minimum of 1,500 words per chapter
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I do not own any of the characters
I found the Image on the internet
Also posted on RR and WebNovel
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This is a fanfic written by a newbie, so there will be various grammar errors scattered across it. So please, bear with me!
So I must review this as I love the concept and idea behind the story.
But I must confess I can't read it some of the logic error in the first three chapters hurt my brain as it makes no sense to have things happen in cycle after cycle the main character going insane and then doing sh*t to become an expert in many fields and say something happened many cycles ago to than say ups were now on the 9th cycle that's not even two hands full so if you would have written after many cycles something changed and not number the last one everything would make a lot more sense to me.
I do think you also need a beta or a grammar program as that kind hurt my brain too.
While as I first said I like the concept I will wait until you rewrite this one (if you ever do so or you have a beta going through this story) it will remain on my read list and I hope you become a better more experienced writer good luck and hopefully other people have less of an issue with your work
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I really like the premise of the story. That's it though. The story and style of writing are very wooden and haphazard, as is the grammar. At quite a few times it's like even the one writing didn't know what would happen next. The source material is often cited wrongly. The game characters share only the name with those versions of them in the story, they're cardboard cutouts.
I'm really shocked this is not the first story of this author!
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Let me preface this review by stating that I adored the mass effect universe. I had 200 hours in multiple playthroughs of ME1, 400 hours in multiple playthroughs of ME2 150 in andromeda but only a single playthrough of ME3. Yes I'm one of the 'crybabies' who felt that Casey Hudsons deus ex ripoff of an ending murdered the franchise. I never thought I'd find myself reading a mass effect inspired novel.
That said I hope it shows just how promising this authors work is that it drew me back into a fandom that burned me so horrifically. No matter your opinion on the games take the time to read the 3 prologue chapters they are very well written and incredibly engaging.
The plot follows a mass effect fan who finds himself isekaied into mass effect as a baby 27 years before the final battle in ME3. He spends his life using his game knowledge to join Sheps crew and beats the reapers with the red ending. 1 year later on his birthday while relaxing with his surviving harem everything goes dark and he wakes up as a baby again 27 years before he final battle.
What follows is the worst kind of groundhog day time loop scenario as the MC is forced to live his life from day 1 over and over always regressing to a baby on his 28th birthday. Sometimes he wins, sometimes he loses, sometimes he goes off the rails and does his own thing.
The psychological impact of living the same short life over and over dealing with the same threat day after day breaks him. He claws his way through and each loop gains bit more knowledge to fortify his resolve. Then all of a sudden he wakes up in his latest loop but with a new feeling telling him that this is it.
Armed with the belief that this is his final loop he does everything he can to ready the universe and protect his family.
Brilliant work so far and well worth the time to read.
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Amazing story
very relatable/understandable/ likable characters
Respect for the canon characters, from the entire story it is clear the author is a fan of the original.
Really wonder what is going on with the timeloop suddenly 'feeling' fixed and the lost memories.
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