The port held a somber gentle atmosphere as the wind caressed the newly informed commander of his wrongdoings. "It really is a shame commander, after all now I have to break both of your legs. Why do you do this to yourself commander?"
Short story about yandere warspite and a commander's twisted corupt world.
What do you get when you combine an insane heroine -- twisted into her current self by the very person she had wanted to protect -- and an inane protagnotist? You get this novel, which... might not be that surprising since you're reading a review about it.
The story so far is good, but sometimes I have to re-read certain paragraphs because dialogues belonging to different characters get mixed with each other. Thus, please use dialogue tags or say who's saying what using brackets.
Even so, thank for you writing this novel. I hope you will continue doing so, because it's quite interesting to read.
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