I'm taking the moment tell everyone a few details about what I have planned for this story. It's unedited, yes. Not 100% perfect in this version, however it is not unplanned. I have a full map for this project and need only to write it out for everyone.
The important thing I wanted to say is that Leona is making progress, but she has a ways to go before she becomes a powerful superheroine. I hope you don't mind that. *winks* It all is important later in the story.
I'm glad you're reading it and enjoy it. Wait for the magical moment where it really happens! That will be at the end of the first arc. At that point the story will change. Stick with me, and I hope you won't regret enjoying these early days of a Superheroine to be!
Luvs and hearts!
Rellawing
If you need another good story to read and have not read
this, please check out my friend Assuchan's rising story:
Schwarz is my Destiny
how may chaps you planning for an arc
We're close to the half-way point since Leona's at the right age in the chapter after this one. It's pretty much linear from there! Although I might go over the halfway point if it feels necessary!
@Rellawing
id say it a fair pacing a little on the slower side but if you doing as much back story and character build up as you are that's not a bad thing
Slow story progression is fine, more plot and character development.
I appreciate the understanding! I know some may be a bit impatient to see that special moment. *winks*
Good things come to those who wait. Like cookies. Yum.
*rains cookies on everyone!* <3
@Rellawing