*
/ After a while, it all starts to fade. No more pain, no more unwanted thoughts and most of all no sound. Just darkness. I welcome it. Cause I was done /
*
"Ahhhhhh........" I screamed at the top of my lung's,
"Ah.... *Panting* *panting* whe..re.. am I,"
I said while looking around, I actually can't see anything it's really dark and my body feels weird, I feel kind of shorter, and,... "Ahhh.." FUCK, I screamed in pain, my whole body hurts it's like I've been beaten up by a group of delinquent's, I know the feeling cause that was half of my school life, anyways why does it hurt so much, wait I remember a truck, yeah truck-Kun he was coming straight at me when I was crossing the street. what happened, am I dead. I know this can't be a hospital, maybe I really am dead,
*Crank* *Crank*
I heard a door opening, finally some light, three people walked into where I am before unlocking what seems to be some kind of iron bars, wait am I in prison,... there is some strange ball of light next to their faces but I still can't see their faces. Because all three of them are wearing some kind of black scary looking devil masks,
"Oh... It seems that the kid is still alive, and his also awake"
"Yeah I thought he was dead, but this one looks to be a fighter,... I think we could actually use him"
"Hahahaha........ If anyone can take a beating like that and survive they are really something, and a kid no less, this one has potential, he may actually service"
The three of them said, wait what do they mean by a kid, *Gasped* now that, that ball of light is here I can actually see, and when I looked down at my body I was beyond shocked, I really am a kid and if the ball of light is what I think it is then I really did die and I got reincarnated as a little kid, I looked to be around five years old... While I was thinking, the man in the front walk closer to me and grabbed my arm with an evil grin on his face and started dragging me with him.
"Looks like the kids already scared shitless!!"
"Hahahaha..... If his scared already, I think he might actually die when we start, cause he has no idea what's coming next, I already feel sorry for you darling"
The man and woman walking behind me said, when I look back I saw the man smiling at me and the woman, she was muttering something underneath her mask *HEAL* I immediately felt the pain from before fade away and now I can actually walk properly magic is so cool, I look back at the woman,
"Thank you"
"You'll be needing that sweetie, think of it as a little heaven before you see hell,"
she said while smiling.
*Gulped* I visibly swallowed my saliva, while thinking, what are they going to do to me anyway??
the man leads me down some stairs and we soon arrived at what looks to be like a lab. I see tables with straps on them and some really weird equipment, what's really weird is in the far corner of this room there seems to be an altar and there is no roof on top of that area. I can see the moonlight shining bright on the table like structure resting there and blood spilt all over it, looks like someone bled to death over there,... while I was looking at the alter the old man holding my arm placed my hand on a white floating crystal-like object,
*Ding*
/STATUS/
- Name - none
- Class - none
- Race - human
- Level- 1
- HP- (10/10 [MP 0/0 [Stamina 5/10)
- Strength- 5
- Defense- 2
- Magic- 0
- Resistance - 0
- Speed - 2
- Charisma - 10
- Luck - (-100)
No skills or abilities????????????????????????????
...What the fuck, that almost gave me a heart attack and what's with these useless stats, I suck balls and -100 luck... Well, that actually explains a lot.
"Hmm... I'm not even sure you will survive the experiments, these are literally the most terrible stats I have ever seen. But let's try it out anyways no harm in trying it out, we have more than enough subjects anyway"
Wait, experiments,... I tried struggling my way out of his grasp but it was no use. He dragged me onto one of the many tables that were in this room and strapped me onto one, I couldn't move a muscle, ok now I am really scared,... the man came near me and said,
"This is going to hurt a lot, but don't worry! I will enjoy every moment of your pain!! "
He actually smiled while saying that,
He injects some black substance into my chest,... instantly I felt as if my whole body was burning from the inside out, it was like every molecule in my body was being destroyed and rebuild a new, "Ahhhhhh..." The pain was just too much, I felt like I was about to die. BUT no this is a world with magic and monsters I won't die here, I will survive and build a new life for my self, I will do whatever I have to survive. Whatever these fuckers are going to do to me I don't care, I'll find a way to escape this place no matter what...
5 YEARS LATER.
I have no idea how long I've been here but I've pretty much given up on escaping. There's just no way out of this place. Every day that man comes and injection the same black substance into my chest, after all this time I'm used to the pain so it doesn't hurt that much. They don't even feed me and I haven't had the need to use the restroom at all, no idea why though, I'm amazed that I'm still alive. And to top it all off I don't even know what the fuck that black substance is. But I was not the only one they injected it to, on the first couple of days I saw them being injected into more kids around my age in this world right now, but none of them survived to see the second dose. After they kept on dying that man stop injecting that substance to anyone else and only focused on me, yay... Lucky me...!
"The child seems to be asleep"
"Yes master, today's dose was injected into him"
"Him hahahaha... I don't think 'he' will be a 'Him' for much longer, the succubus blood seems to be working, but slowly, he will slowly turn into a woman in a couple of years I predict. How much more of that demon's blood do we have"
he said while inspecting the feminine features on the child,
"....... None master, we injected the last drop of that demon's blood to the boy today,"
The man says sweating.
"Hmm... What's the race of the other demon we captured, and that succubus is dead, right"
" It's a Vampire, master and yes that demon died when her last drop of blood was extracted,"
He says in a relieved expression.
"Good, no, excellent, then Start injecting the Vampire blood into this one, all of that demon's blood may be used for this child if needed"
"Yes master"
Haaaaaa... What the fucking fuck in the fuckers fuck... Succubus blood and vampire blood what the fuck, and I'm not asleep, I was just resting my eyes,... Well, at least now I know what they have been injecting me with. I have a feeling I will be here for a long time...
Ima still trying to finger out the title caring mother is he getting a caring mother or is he going to become the caring mother
Hehehe,
I have to say that the space betwen paragraphs is massive on mobile phone
- (-100)
(-2)^-2
? that's just -0,25
I think the first - is meant as spacing, but yeah, definitely misleading at a first glance.
@ThomasBricks I'm actually surprised that people are still reading this novel after all the trash talk about it
@Queen well, if there was any trash talk, then I did not see it. Doesn't withhold me from reading a work anyways.
I'm not that far in, but yeah there are definitely some misleading parts in your writing style so far, although things have been improving. (maybe a prologue would have helped? I see that it's in hiatus, don't worry about rewriting or others opinions, you'll get better while practicing anyways :) )
Story wise it has been a great premise so far! Hope to see other works with these kinds of storylines/premises in the future.
@ThomasBricks thank you
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