Sam opened his eyes and blinked a few times. He was surprised and shocked as mere moments before, he was in excruciating pain due to being shot in the groin, then his head exploded and that’s all he remembered.
Yet now he felt no pain. He was in a room of some sort that was completely white as far as he could see. There was nothing around him and he wondered if he was blind and could only see white.
In fact, maybe even calling it a room wouldn't be accurate. The place was so large, he couldn't see the end. However, everything was white, the roof/sky, the floor, he could barely see the difference between the floor and the sky.
"Am I dead? Is this heaven or something?" he thought to himself as he looked around. He moved his hands and looked at them.
“So slender and smooth. These are not my hands, are they?” he asked himself, remembering the stubby hands he regularly used to pleasure himself.
Suddenly, words popped up in front of his consciousness.
[Subject consciousness recovered. Initiating contact]
“What? What was that?” thought Sam as he looked ahead of him helplessly.
[Samuel Serra. Born 01 of January 2001 at 1.01 AM. Died 1 January at 1.01AM. Consciousness acquired at precisely the time where the Space-Time Stargates are aligned]
“Huh? What?” he said and patted himself down”
“Holy fuck!” s/he said looking down. She had huge breasts on her chest. They were more than a handful and soft and so wonderful to grasp.
Her hands moved further below, and she found a smooth, hairless surface where his penis should be. Moving further down, she felt a soft, wet slit.
“Holy shit, I’m a girl!” she exclaimed.
[Affirmative. Your body was destroyed in the fire. The just and fair thing to do is to use the body of your murderer]
“My… murde….Sharon???” she gasped. She looked at her body and indeed it was a gorgeous female body.
Sharon was 5 foot 9 inches tall, fit and athletic and she was now her, wearing her school uniform, and carrying a sling bag and luckily for her, boots and knee high socks.
[Your Adventure starts on the road to the town of Willow. Good luck]
“Wait.. what?” she gasped, still disoriented and unable to comprehend what was going on.
Suddenly, the room walls went from opaque white, then transparent. She could see that around her were fields and forest and there was a path between them.
She took one step and suddenly, as if she entered from one dimension to another, the scene burst to life.
She felt the wind in her hair and sounds of the forest could be heard. She looked at the bag he was carrying, Sharon’s bag.
It was a brown bag made of leather, which at least fit the surroundings to a certain extent. There were makeup, lipstick, a purse, mobile phone, tissue paper, tampons, and a can of mace and a handgun.
“Eureka! A gun!” she thought. She didn’t know anything about guns, but at least she had one.
She tested the mobile phone, but as she expected, there was no phone connection, no GPS and no data connection.
She walked further, touching her breasts again. She couldn’t stop playing with them.
Looking under her blouse, she could see her lacy bra and she untucked her blouse and her hand reached under to grope her own breasts, enjoying herself.
As she walked, she passed by a lake and she stopped to check himself out. She looked into the clear waters and touched her face.
Her/Sharon’s face was gorgeous. She puckered up and kissed at her reflection, imagining herself kissing Sharon.
Just then, she looked at the reflection under her skirt and could barely see the reflection of panties matching her lacy bra. She lifted his skirt a bit and took a better look. She moved the panties to one side to see her hairless crotch.
“Fuck” she thought to himself, as she saw cum leaking out of her pussy. This body must have been taken directly after he was killed and Sharon had not cleaned up after herself yet.
She walked off the path, following the outline of the lake and found a quiet corner. Checking that no-one was around, she removed her bag and all her clothes and took a dip into the lake.
The water was clean and completely clear, so she felt safe that he wouldn’t get attacked by any crocodiles or other creatures. With Sharon’s panties, she washed them and used them to clean her pussy.
Her fingers entered the soft flesh, completely cleaning out all the cum inside her, hoping that this adventure wouldn’t be complicated with a pregnancy.
She enjoyed the feeling of fingering herself that she took much longer than she needed to clean herself up.
Finally clean, she squeezed the panties dry and walked out of the lake. She placed the damp panties on a rock and started fumbling with her bra, trying to put them on.
“How the hell does anyone do this?” she mumbled as her hands reached behind her back, but was unable to hook the bra together.
Suddenly, she heard a loud honk and as she turned around, only to see a goose charge at her.
“Ow!” she yelled as the goose bit her pretty little ass.
She started running in circles avoiding the goose. Just then she stumbled over a rock falling down and causing a gash on her foot. The goose jumped on her, biting one of her large breasts.
“Ouch! Get off me” she yelled as she grabbed the goose by its neck. It was surprisingly strong and she struggled to get it off.
Finally, she managed to grab its neck with her left hand and held it to the ground. With her right hand, she reached for the rock she stumbled on and smashed it on the goose’s head.
Her first smash, knocked the goose square in the head, causing it to honk. To her surprise gold coins appeared out of nowhere onto the ground.
She was stunned for a while, but the goose’s feet started kicking her large breasts.
“You bastard” she went berserk and continued smashing the goose’s head. Every time she hit it, more and more coins bounced out of the goose. Finally, it was dead.
She threw the goose aside and tried to pick up the gold coins. Surprisingly, the coins disappeared whenever she touched them.
“What the heck? It’s like a computer game!” she exclaimed.
Suddenly, a thought came to her mind. “Computer! Inventory!” she commanded.
Surely enough a screen came up in her mind.
[Inventory: Gold 13 coins]
“Thought so” she said. Just then, she turned to the dead goose only to find a large cooked drumstick the size of the entire goose.
“Ah…. This….It really is like a computer game” she exclaimed, gratefully picking up the drumstick and taking a bite.
As she did, she felt the pain of the bites on her naked butt and breast disappear as well as the cut on her foot where she fell.
She washed her hands in the lake after eating a quarter of the drumstick and saved it in her inventory.
Then she started getting dressed again. She couldn’t figure out how to put on the bra, so she stuffed it into her bag, only wearing the blouse and skirt together with the boots. The panties rode up her butt, so she didn’t feel comfortable wearing them. So in the bag they went as well.
So, with the wind blowing up her bare ass and causing her nipples to stand in attention, she continued down the part towards Willow.
Wow, that's messed up.
Still, I think you've changed the pronouns way too fast. I mean, I've seen authors do it as soon as they reveal the MC has changed gender, but you've done it even faster by using a different pronoun before we even now it for sure. And using "s/he" is kinda tasteless. Yes, you've dropped obvious enough hints, like the state of his hands, but still.
Also, there's the fact that MC has accepted it way too easily. I would be perplexed to see myself being reborn, in a woman's body, and the body of my killer at that. And realizing that this newly-gained body was already defiled, with the results still being here... Nah, way too little of a reaction from Sam.
Though... I probably think too much into it – it seems to be a casual novel like most isekais ones are.
@liampark
after looking at some of the other comments, maybe I unleashed my frustrations a bit too early as this like only the second chapter but a lot of my points I still stand by.
yeah even a lot of the novels that change the gender of the main character change pronouns way too quickly. Someones gender is different from sex. I know that even if my body turned female right now, I would still consider myself male and prefer male pronouns. So far there has been no indication that he ever felt body dysphoria or considered himself female before the change (witch could have help make a better backstory for the MC and the reason why he is ostracized).
Honestly at this point it just feels like the authors don't understand trans and gender identity at all.
It also is like his previous male s*x does not matter at all for the story then why have him start as male if you instantly switch to female. Plot wise why would you do that if you are not willing to write about the struggles of a new body and what that means for for identity. That could be vary interesting but none of the stories similar to this one do that at all. After the switch the MC is just the new gender and affects next to nothing other than maybe being an excuse for liking females or not want to have s*x with a guy and that is about it.
TLDR: just feels like waster potential with the gender swap and that is useless and you could get the same story if you just did not do a gender swap and started MC as female.
You're not thinking too much, that was a lazy and poorly written rebirth. Not even sure I will continue reading
@RobotRatz666 look into gray gender and a-gender. if mc fell into one of those cathegories those struggles would be meaningless to him/her. exept the body being recently used that is... point i'm making is that there are many different people handling the same situations differently, and there are plenty of people who could handle the situation this well, as such if that is the kind of person the author wants to write about i find it kinda anoying that people try to force them to have the same issues they or someone they know have... not everything has to be a political statement, sometimes people want to do/read/write stuff simply for enjoyment or to expand their horizons, (and honestly reading too much angst is probably not something that is gonna put you in a healthy state of mind, so sprinkling in some stories where people are either so put together or carefree that they trivialise your problems might help put you in a state of mind where your problems don't really seem that important anymore and you start doing stuff that actually deals with what you can, and move on to things that focuses on doing things that makes you happy and actually start enjoying your life however that is done for you.) it is admirable that you try to improve the world for a group of people but try not to attack another group that is not hurting anyone while doing so.
@RobotRatz666 uhmm... after reading a few chapters further and seeing how quickly mc used a new power to swap back to male the mc is clearely attached to their gender so i guess they normaly should have had some issues with the swap. admitedly the mc might be a totaly carefree individual and taking everything as it comes though that is admitedly less likely in reality... and with the author using tags in their story and not at all following through i'll admit it is likely the author is a bit of a troll and his story should not even remotely be taken seriously...