Utter insanity don't read it if you value yours things are too easily gained for Sam and everything that happens to him is a cheat if he needs or wants something he just conveniently gains it in essence this is complete and utter bull sh*t with a plot like it was written by a third grader and then written by their teacher it only makes a good comedy

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Okay while I haven't read the whole story this is what I can tell you; I dont feel like the side characters (mainly the familars) have enough depth. What I mean is that when you first began toying with the summoning the character acted somewhat realistic with they're responses but now it feels very bland with how its rinse and repeat. My suggestion (which if you want to ignore because it's your story) is that you should have made where the familars felt comfortable around the MC but not to the extent of adoring him immediately and have them slowly develop feelings. Another issue is the sheer amount of familars but that's to be expected of a large harem story. Okay now some of the good things are that I like the concept of how you bringing in a wide plethora of characters that have good potential and while the system is way too op, I do feel that the interactions the MC had with it too amusing to pass so good job with that. So yeah overall it's a weird wacky porno that I am still reading for bizarre reason

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