DO NOT READ THIS WITH A SERIOUS EXPECTATION. THIS IS A COMEDY STORY, PURE ENTERTAINMENT.

This is the crux of the problem when it comes to ratings as many are probably one star ratings made out of spite, this story is probably around a 4.2 if you want an accurate rating.

Initially I felt the same as many readers, disappointed and misled- however you must not take this story seriously. It is clear that as the story progresses, so too does the author's ability to construct the world and characters, there are several interesting plot points in the later chapters that were unexpected.

Read this to ENJOY something silly and you'll have a great read; don't try to gauge this as a novel of literary competency, but purely as something made for amusement- if you come into this expecting a serious read you're going to be sorely disappointed and likely to drop this before you ever get to the teen chapters.

Having said that, around chapter 12 I just decided to not take it seriously and after that it just got more entertaining as the story progressed which is odd because generally I cannot stand works that derive fiction from elsewhere (might as well be fanfics imho) but this somehow made me want to keep reading. I thoroughly enjoyed this and I'm saddened I discovered this so soon, perhaps if I had found this a year from now there would have been more to read.

To the author: Well done, you pulled me in and kept me for the whole thing and I can't say I was ever bored, the pacing is quick, something's always happening- in the early chapters it feels forced and I almost dropped it when they kept jumping into another 'situation' but later it makes sense why they were in those situations and it no longer felt forced. I fully expected to drop this novel and yet you managed to keep me interested. I hope you continue writing and that people read this review and don't 1-star bomb your novel without first giving it a chance, a chance it totally deserves. Good job!

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Utter insanity don't read it if you value yours things are too easily gained for Sam and everything that happens to him is a cheat if he needs or wants something he just conveniently gains it in essence this is complete and utter bull sh*t with a plot like it was written by a third grader and then written by their teacher it only makes a good comedy

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another trash fire on scribbehub, first the first 2 chapters was ok abit rushed but could be understood but soon as third chapter rolled around things toke a turn for the worst. The author just wrote what ever he wanted without even bothering to think if what he wrote makes sense or would keep the audiences attention. In many ways its more stupid comedy power fullfillment story if anything. As it is theres way to many of this type of storys running around so no originallity other then the setting.

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Okay while I haven't read the whole story this is what I can tell you; I dont feel like the side characters (mainly the familars) have enough depth. What I mean is that when you first began toying with the summoning the character acted somewhat realistic with they're responses but now it feels very bland with how its rinse and repeat. My suggestion (which if you want to ignore because it's your story) is that you should have made where the familars felt comfortable around the MC but not to the extent of adoring him immediately and have them slowly develop feelings. Another issue is the sheer amount of familars but that's to be expected of a large harem story. Okay now some of the good things are that I like the concept of how you bringing in a wide plethora of characters that have good potential and while the system is way too op, I do feel that the interactions the MC had with it too amusing to pass so good job with that. So yeah overall it's a weird wacky porno that I am still reading for bizarre reason

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