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Fleshcrafting Technomancer
Fleshcrafting Technomancer
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A second chance, a failed reincarnation. He lies on a wooden stake, burning amidst a sea of jeering rabble, at last grasping alien truths. In this new world:

Good cowered.
Order Perished!
Damnation Reigned!!
And if God can't save him, the Devil shall!!!

Follow Kilian as he sheds his last bits of innocence, trades his soul for a third chance, and rises to tame a wretched, dystopian world through devious cunning, unorthodox sorcery, and a little harem of monster girls on the side.

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      Viridius
      Status: breed me, master! (r-18)
      Mar 25, 2020

      Two stars. The novel suffers from many of the same problems as Devil Paragon's other work. 

      Now, at first glance, it seems to be a well-articulated work with a sophisticated vocabulary, especially in a genre so overpopulated with writers who don't have a grasp on basic grammar. And then you read the next chapter, and realise that while the bit of prose the author does know is decent, its scope is not. Devil Paragon seems to only know a couple words with more than three syllables, and boy does he flaunt them. His relatively decent vocabulary is overshadowed by the constant, unrepentant use of a few uncommon words and phrases. 

      Which brings us to the most glaring flaw in all his works: the sheer dullness of each and every character. Everything, dialogue and prose, is written in the same overbearing, arrogant, hyperbatonic speech, conjuring images of Chinese xianxia. Women fall to the main character's feet, quite literally losing their "normal" intelligence (professed by the harem members themselves!) at the mere sight of him, attracted by his demon-granted perfect looks or his "personality", while I'm left scratching my head, trying to find the personality that he has. He's lived through multiple lives, one of them in the modern day, yet speaks in the same antiquated fashion, remorseless at casual murder or mind-control. He claims motivation through veangeance, yet we see none of it in his actions. He's perfect, a paragon of ruthlessness, intelligence, charm, whose only "character development" is development of power.

      Even past this, our classic xianxia flaws are here! Nebulous, undefined power systems, fluid in power creep and rigid in use. Fights reduced to whose cock is larger. Total lack of direction save for increasing power.

      And the most ridiculous thing? This entire review could be said about his other work as well.

      Just... don't, guys.

      Really.

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