Anthony Saunders died an orphan, alone and miserable because of a pandemic disease, and was transported to another world as a farmer’s son named Anton. The surprising thing was there was a tattoo of his favorite game Diablo II on his wrists. He was able to enter the game even virtually and all spells and stats of equipped items will reflect in the real world but unfortunately, he can’t take items from the game to the real world. He could use the inventory though!
The best part was his Diablo II icon had an internet browser that allowed him to surf the internet from his previous world, but he couldn’t communicate with anyone, just search, read, and watch using the browser, but it saved Anthony from the greatest affliction of all, Boredom!
With all the information from his previous world at his fingertips, he should become rich right? Well…
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I haven't read much, so far I'm liking the story and the MC's personality is not annoying, I just hope it's not the typical story of a nobleman X is interested in MC or sister and the MC ends up fighting to save himself and along the way father dies. Hopefully it will be a story of travel and discovery rather than war and tragedy.
thanks for sharing the story :)
By the way, I'm not an English speaker and at the moment Google-chan translates everything and it doesn't give me any problems reading. I don't know about native speakers but at least the grammar hasn't caused me any problems.
Second review, although the story is slow and I hope that in the future it will have a better pace of travel, it is well written and explained. Currently we do not know the power level of the world so there is not much to compare it with so although the MC is "strong from the beginning" he has a consistent line of growth, which justifies his strength, that is, he uses his system, He levels up and then trains the powers he acquired, so he's not strong because crap.
If there is something I could add, it is that I hope he does not have a growth limit, in the game the upper limit is understandable. But in the global scheme I think it is not.
I sincerely like it and it is one of the few series that I follow when its chapters premiere.
thank you very much author and keep it up
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I was able to almost make it to 100 chapters to help give y’all a better review. The overall concept is ok and the broad look at the plot is decent. The issue comes when you start to look deeper. The characters seem very 1 dimensional and no where close to people. The MC and the little sister are terribly presented. The emotions are very forced if any are written about. The system needs to be broken down and defined more especially with the MCs growth. As a clue for the system side, if you are killing Diablo on nightmare, then bring those skills/abilities to real life, nothing is stopping you... that is a hint at the strength there. Little details seem very forced and side characters are presented as unintelligent to put it mildly. Grammer and spelling are understandable, not perfect but good enough. Some comments are repeated to much especially within conversations, with the same characters or internal monologue. I have no idea why but they are... Overall a good concept but needs some more deeper planning done with characters, plot, and the system. Another hint, the system should give the MC whatever there hearts want, it’s not a system if it does. For the author, keep writing so you can keep improving!
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