By Snusmumriken
Erf paid the price for his power, even if it was too much. He received a boon, even if it was too great. And now he needs to survive in an alien world while ensuring the safety of his estranged family. As the world will push him deeper and deeper
Grammar: 5/5 – Very few typos.
Writing style: 2/5 – Unimpressive. There's no immersion. There are no smooth flowing conversations. There are some pointless infodumps and descriptions of "techniques" that add nothing to the story and only inflate the word count. Not rated at 1/5 because this is still not quite yet rock bottom.
Characters: 2/5 – Barely any individuality and personality. All characters suffer from a negative intelligence modifier. Incompetent "goddesses". Bonus points for MC not being a scumbag with that sort of setting (at least so far).
Worldbuilding: 2/5 – With what has been described the whole place should have gone up in flames long ago, forget about MC managing to get there. Not rating at 1/5 because there's at least an attempt to be creative, even if it's a fail.
Reading enjoyment: 1/5
I have considered giving this story a 2/5, but it's clear that the author is putting in effort, so I'm giving it a 3/5.
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