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Pages: | 148 |
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Grammar: 5/5 – Very few typos.
Writing style: 2/5 – Unimpressive. There's no immersion. There are no smooth flowing conversations. There are some pointless infodumps and descriptions of "techniques" that add nothing to the story and only inflate the word count. Not rated at 1/5 because this is still not quite yet rock bottom.
Characters: 2/5 – Barely any individuality and personality. All characters suffer from a negative intelligence modifier. Incompetent "goddesses". Bonus points for MC not being a scumbag with that sort of setting (at least so far).
Worldbuilding: 2/5 – With what has been described the whole place should have gone up in flames long ago, forget about MC managing to get there. Not rating at 1/5 because there's at least an attempt to be creative, even if it's a fail.
Reading enjoyment: 1/5
I have considered giving this story a 2/5, but it's clear that the author is putting in effort, so I'm giving it a 3/5.
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