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I enjoyed the start, it was a very interesting opening that was very good in getting my attention. It felt serious enough.
The System itself was something unique to me and the prospect of what Kaori could achieve with it was also interesting.
Kaori's initial character, the new Kaori (not deceased Kaori), adopted her predecessor's qualities. An unassuming young woman who seems smart enough and is apathetic to an extent. But as of Chapter: 12, she basically gets completely replaced by a new personality due to the
Uzumaki Bloodline
Frankly I found it jarring, and as of Chapter: 21 I couldn't really convince myself to read further as at that point I realised that it wasn't the type of fiction I was looking for. Please note that it's still early in the story, really early in fact, and that perhaps it changes in the future. I kind of doubt it, it's good for what it is meant to be, which honestly fits the anime's theme of Naruto rather than a more serious telling.
Please don't let this make you not read this story though. It's definitely interesting and has a solid outline, and the writing was pretty good too along with an intricate enough system. It's just that it quickly veered into territory that I don't enjoy in Naruto fanfictions.
Message to the Author: This is a classic tale of, "it's not a you problem, it's a me problem." so don't feel disheartened. It really is a quality story so far, just not for me.
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