While helping the local dog shelter evacuate the dogs due to a tornado, the building I was in collapsed. Not understanding sarcasm, a self proclaimed god reincarnated me in the Naruto world with the powers of Sakuya Izayoi. I might as well make the most of my new life, what's the worst that could happen?
I'm a new writer and this is my first fanfiction, so please be gentle with the criticism.
Yet more Touhou fan content. But wait, it's not a novel on an indefinite hiatus from mid-2023!? No vey!? Seriously, what is it with Touhou fans- myself included- and not finishing what we've started? So far, this one's promising. There isn't any particularly glaring grammatical gaffs, and the characters are consistent- well, as consistent as they can be over four chapters. The formatting could use a bit of work, but it isn't a text wall, so I'm willing to put up with it. Best of all, the author (kinda sorta) promises yuri! Hark! Keep up the good work! Although, you might want to make use of more tags. Even if you end up removing them later, it's better to give people a good idea of what they're getting into.
(Yes, I just used hark in a review. I'm not sorry.)
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