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So far, the story has been pretty good, it also includes realism to an extent so that's a plus for me
Though the MC suddenly started acting a bit too... Childish after she ran away from the kid she saved and reached that town (I am bad at remembering names, so please forgive me), which seems odd, or maybe it's just her personality (which would be odd for a former 18 year old boy), or maybe her personality was altered for some reason
A few I could think of are: New brain because of her new body (which I doubt it, but I'll still add it here), Magic, now that she has it coursing through her body, it could've very well altered a few things, or lastly, she's not used to dealing with people anymore, I don't really know how long she lived alone, but a living alone for some time and when you finally re-entered civilization, you were chased out by them, it will definitely hit something, whether be it big or small
Or maybe it's just me
Then there's the grammar, while it's pretty good, it needs a bit of work, I recommend rereading your chapters and look for mistakes since I saw quite a few when I was just casually scrolling through chapters, I wasn't really paying attention for mistakes but I still found some
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