Josh (later named Tori) was a normal guy you can see everywhere in a modern world. He died...but guess what?....HE REINCARNATES WITH THE HELP OF GOD!!!
Creating the most greatest creations the Artifact, The Strongest Battle Spaceship. He ventures through many worlds and dimensions using his Spaceship.
Join him on his comedic findings. A guy who loves to experience new things as he does his silly "little" adventures.
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Well, I have never been an Ariftura fan, sorry for bad spelling, I am too lazy. So here is my review.
While a good job is done, I feel the protagonist a bit lacking in his confusion for dying. Yeah, it is a light hearted comedy, I get that, but that happened too quick. Maybe give a better description, of both your physical and surrounding state. You could say things like, I noticed I wasn't breathing, or show him suprised to be floating. I know many prefer to skip all that meaningless banter, but it breaks the link between me and book.
Also, one of Arutiara's (yeah, I am gonna mess up the spelling everytime) best point I felt were its world description. Whenever the MC wasn't in danger, as he would just sit to relax. While it is important to develop your own style, For a fanfic, try to copy the author's style.
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