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/ Series / I ask God to give me the 7 Age of Gods magic from the story “Arifureta Shokugyō de Sekai Saikyō” and I created Artifacts to my own convenience.
I ask God to give me the 7 Age of Gods magic from the story “Arifureta Shokugyō de Sekai Saikyō” and I created Artifacts to my own convenience.
I ask God to give me the 7 Age of Gods magic from the story “Arifureta Shokugyō de Sekai Saikyō” and I created Artifacts to my own convenience.
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      Agentt
      Status: c1

      Well, I have never been an Ariftura fan, sorry for bad spelling, I am too lazy. So here is my review.

      While a good job is done, I feel the protagonist a bit lacking in his confusion for dying. Yeah, it is a light hearted comedy, I get that, but that happened too quick. Maybe give a better description, of both your physical and surrounding  state. You could say things like, I noticed I wasn't breathing, or show him suprised to be floating. I know many prefer to skip all that meaningless banter, but it breaks the link between me and book. 

      Also, one of Arutiara's (yeah, I am gonna mess up the spelling everytime) best point I felt were its world description. Whenever the MC wasn't in danger, as he would just sit to relax. While it is important to develop your own style, For a fanfic, try to copy the author's style.

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