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Alright, this story is really well written in my opinion. The very first chapter hooked me with its storytelling and how well the main character introduced themselves. Throughout later chapters, it presents us the thoughts, fear and anxiety of the main character and how that interacts with others which I really enjoy.
I wouldn't like to say the characters are completely fleshed out and all seem very realistic, but for the current state of the story, this may change with time. The characters seem 2.5d at the least with motivations and believable thought trains.
I recommend reading this as I think, from the way the story writes the characters, is really worth it.
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Very well written, the storytelling and worldbuilding really fits together. Characters are introduced and are not just one dimensional characters (Some of them right now atleast) and we see them develop along with the MC.
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Intriguing plot, in a more political sense then the literary one. The main character returns to the past and makes plans to improve her future like normally happens in these types of stories, but her plans go horribly wrong since she was missing crucial information about her father.
The writing is good and the characters are interesting.
Im rooting for the main character to find happiness and escape from the shadows of her trash of a parent.
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