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Lament of the Slave
Lament of the Slave
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The world is not always as beautiful and forgiving as one would imagine, and Korra Grey, a young florist, who is abducted by a creature of the children's books, finds herself in another world quickly learning that life can be even crueler than she thought.

After more than a year of pain and suffering in the madman's cellar, she gets what she sought the most, freedom. Though changed by cruelty she suffered. Either she learns to live with the mutations or finds a way to reverse them while she struggles to find her own place in a world utterly unknown to her, hunted not only by the nightmares of her past.

Art by.. Me :)
Updates: Wednesday, Saturday - at least I'm trying
I am currently releasing this story on scribblehub.com and royalroad.com.

Transported to another world (isekai), somewhat standard fantasy setting with my beginner attempts to make it dark but not too much. There are litRPG elements there, but numbers are not what this story is about. You could say it's with a touch of Slice of Life. Yet, you can expect fights, monsters, beasts, and enemies from the ranks of humans, but not OP MC - she will have to get there.
The story I wrote after I found the courage to do so. I don't want to discourage you, but I say in advance that English is my second language, and that can be reflected in grammar. I'm doing my best, so please be lenient. :)

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Adventurers Animal Characteristics Beastkin Beasts Beautiful Female Lead Cautious Protagonist Character Growth Curses Death Demi-Humans Evil Organizations Evolution Female Protagonist Genetic Modifications Gore Human Experimentation Library Mind Control Mutations Poisons R-18 Slave Protagonist Slaves
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    Arkus86
    Status: chapter 126: déjà vu

    Really the only negative thing I have to say about this story, is that it gets nowhere fast. Even at the current release rate of two chapter per week, it can take weeks to get through a single day.

    To give you a better idea, 126 chapters in and barely around a week passed in-world since the start of the story proper.

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    Edit: I'm dropping this as of chapter 195. Minor spoilers follow.

    Spoiler

    Nothing wrong when the MC loses to objectively stronger oponents, but when the author pulls what I would personally call Deus ex machina literally at the last second, by making her... lets say instincts react in a way completely different from a very similar situation earlier in the story, just to make her lose an already lost fight even harder, it is grating.

    It does not help that someone who, by how he was introduced before, should have been able to intervene in time to prevent the worst, but did not even realize something was wrong until after it was all over.

    And to rub insult into injury, it is all turned into just an overly dramatic character introduction, when  there is no meaningful or lasting consequence for everything that happened, with the MC and the character in question moving on practically as if nothing happened.

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    ScaredScarecrow
    Status: chapter 47: chase

    This story is really good. So far we only have been introduced to a few characters, but the ones we have been shown so far are well-written, and beliveable in their interactions with the protagonist. The release schedule is slower than I would have preferred, but the quality of the writing more than makes up for it.

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    A wonderful story that has done well to keep me invested and intrigued. My only major gripe within the story is a lack of world building, the author has done a good job of placing the characters within this world, but I don't fell immersed within it. There are so many things I don't know that hasn't received attention, however I am excited to see this world explored in the future. A fun read that I expect good things from in the future.

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    Dragons
    Status: chapter 98: try to keep up

    This is an amazing story so far. I have nothing bad to say about it honestly. There are a few grammar mistakes here and there but those will be fixed during revision and maybe even improved. 

    The sequence of events keeps you entertained and interested in what’s going on and I have had a blast reading this while I could (at current chapter: 98). 

    The author portrays events well, has a good reference of the world the MC is in and a part of. They show and convey the thoughts of the MC as well as those around her very well and the slow build to understand herself and get stronger is a nice change in the recent things I’ve read so far on this platform. 

    I highly recommend you to read this and don’t be surprised if you get pissed off because of twists and certain events that challenge the MC’s state of mind and physical capability 

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    Azzry
    Status: c54

    Hello, when I started your story, I was hooked and couldn't stop until the end. It's well written, the MC and the story are interesting.

    I loved it, I will be looking forward to the next chapters.

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