A well-written story that leaves me no complaints thus far except that I would like more fights for the protagonist, but as I can feel it coming in the pacing of the story and thematically it wouldn't provide much I can overlook this area as a personal taste.
I look forward to updates, and hopeful people get smote in coming chapters.
Warning to any readers, the author seems to think writing a chapter with multiple gang rapes, incest, incestual rape, murder, infanticide and s*xual slavery only needs "hint, it's not a pretty sight" as a warning
Really enjoyed the first chapter and second chapters, not so much the third and the {side story} has everything I warned you about above - the author says he dealt with those events sympathetically but I strongly disagree - up to you to make up your own mind, but I will not be reading any further.
The bits that were good, were really good, the bits that were bad were distasteful and unpleasant to read.
A well-written story that leaves me no complaints thus far except that I would like more fights for the protagonist, but as I can feel it coming in the pacing of the story and thematically it wouldn't provide much I can overlook this area as a personal taste.
I look forward to updates, and hopeful people get smote in coming chapters.
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Warning to any readers, the author seems to think writing a chapter with multiple gang rapes, incest, incestual rape, murder, infanticide and s*xual slavery only needs "hint, it's not a pretty sight" as a warning
Really enjoyed the first chapter and second chapters, not so much the third and the {side story} has everything I warned you about above - the author says he dealt with those events sympathetically but I strongly disagree - up to you to make up your own mind, but I will not be reading any further.
The bits that were good, were really good, the bits that were bad were distasteful and unpleasant to read.
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