By Adamos_Amet
Austin was a kid that loved to watch Anime, especially Pokemon. Annoyed at how the series was going after Sinnoh, he fell asleep before waking up, somehow as Ash the morning he began his journey. In shock at what happened he tries to find a way to
ngl, I think this is the best Naruto's fanfiction, until now there's no harem, no forced comedy, no logical flaw
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The story is okay-ish. Protag wants to be the strongest to be free, understandable but classic and unoriginal. Might as well have no goal at all for all the difference it makes. Also suffers from holding the occasional idiot ball for no particular reason. On the up-side protag isn't either completely clueless, nor is he a sociopathic murder-hobo as is too often the case in fanfics.
The game system is average, classic Gamer System that is poorly understood by both the protag AND the author himself. On the upside at least it's not sentient and there's no Party sub-system (yet?).
The writing is above average. Few to no typos or grammar issues but lots and lots of clues that the author doesn't really re-read his own work as some the few that exist and a lot of plot points just come up two, three, or even four time in a row. Might not be an issue if reading the chapters one per week, but reading the story in one go makes it very flagrant.
The setting itself is solid so far, no AU weirdness aside from necessary (and admittedly interesting) OC characters, and most named characters are generally faithful to their canon personality (the exception being pre-massacre Sasuke who somehow inherited a big chunk of his post-massacre personality...).
The setting magic chakra is also generally faithful to Shippuuden Naruto Lore, and the story's pace is, while maybe a bit slow for some, entirely within the realm of reasonable so you'll actually want to read each chapter.[edit] some strange AU weirdness has been added in Genjutsu, seemingly for the express purpose of nerfing protag and his Gamer Mind immunity to mind alterations.
Generally a solid if un-exceptional Naruto fanfic.
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The gamer system. Frankly speaking, not the most thought-out system. Rather one of the worst. And if you are already familiar with it, then half of the work is already familiar to you.
This could be compensated with good humor (failure), an interesting MC (failure), a unique view of the Naruto universe (failure) or an good storytelling (failure)...... You can safely skip paragraphs (or even chapters), and not miss anything important.
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Among the sea of trash a hidden gem appears! I usually dislike fan fics but this one is unlike the rest. All the power ups seem to be well deserved and the character progression is seamless. The story is well written with no major plot holes or plot armor while still being true to the original. I can confidently say this is probably the best Naruto fan fic ever written.
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Best Naruto-Gamer fanfic I read till now. (i have read dozens).
Even though story is a little slow paced (author keeps apologizing for it), it is NOT even tiny bit Boring. with great power levelling. I love it and hope to see more.
pray that the author does not drop
Really loved how the interactions between characters going...
Gamer interface is perfect and neat. (In most gamer fics, it usually kind of gets out of control as the story progresses... and become weird).
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Great story really love how the story flows and how you insert the plot line, the power leveling of the MC is also within a reasonable range, though I recommend the author to lessen the chapters when MC is dungeon diving and use TIME SKIPS in it for better convince for the readers.
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Around a 4.5 rounded Up, (Made at chapter 244). I think I would've rounded down, but it's kept up its quality for 200+ chapters, so 5 it is!
The story is pretty good, and uploads consistency which is always a positive.
I do really love the characters, the development of characters, the world, . Which yes is a fanfic so some of that is already built, but the author does a great job over all that and explaining, and adding a bunch of their own elements.
MCs powers I do like, well most of them I do like. He plays it smart with what he has access to, and let's people know as much as they need to.
Honestly, the only power of the MCs I dislike is
The copying... copying powers can be very hit or miss depending on the story, and they do feel like kind of miss for this one. It's not bad to negatively impact my overall experience, but being nit-picky on picking a complaint for the story, this is one.
Overall, it's a pretty good fanfic and a good story.
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At the moment I'm writing this review the story is still at academy levels:Despite the autor writing well and consistency, the main character is uninteresting, but the main problem I have with this story is him borrowing the 'The Gamer' System but nerfing him in some areas that it's 'ok' but massively upgrading the bonus it gives in others that absolutelly doesn't make sense at the current skill level. The autor doesn't ponder much about the effects of % effects, buffs and debuffs, the real effects of some skills and passives, for example:
The main character is not even a genin yet and he already have skills to negate %damage from any kind of damage up to 40%+ only by doing less training than rock lee and the skill is related to only his physical stats
The description of dual wielding imply that the effect can be used even without using two weapons at the same time with diferent hands
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This series is really good and among the Naruto fanfics it is even more exceptional.
Some readers may find flaws with MC leveling up too fast or receiving stats in a burst but I had a fun time reading this. Plus the author has done a really good job fitting in the gamer system into Naruto universe. The way details are presented are very good. At times I was certainly troubled by excessively long list of stats and skills but it has become better over time.
There have been some semi filler chapters I felt but author has kept a good pace overall and I'll continue to follow this as I feel it'll get even better in future. Definitely recommend this simply because it is a fun read plus there are wholesome moments and much less dark/gruesome details as of now
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An awesome Naruto gamer fanfic, only issue from my side was complete status which would take more than half the chapter and dungeon fights getting longer which author already addressed in the latest chapter so 5 stars from me
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