When MC is thinking: 'Thoughts.'
When any other character besides MC is thinking: 'Thoughts.'
When the MC is doing damage: -999.
When the MC or an 'ally' is taking damage: -999! or even -999*
Kingdom = Planet
And each kingdom consists of: Region -> Division (or Main Division) -> Sub-Division.
Faouzia Dirnn - She is a LT General that MC meets when entering the game at first. Red hair, modest bosom, a 'childbearing' perfectly shaped waist, charming big darkest grey eyes, soft yet elastic lips with a pale-pink touch.
Vyb - Diana's friend she made after the little tournament at the end of the first volume. Silvery-blonde long hair tied to a ponytail, strong blue eyes, and has a similar body to Diana as well.
Fael (Little Maid) - 1.60m tall, long blue hair and pure black eyes. Pale red lips, slim elegant nose, modest chest and overbearing (and tasty) hips. Pretty slim legs, and her ASS is slightly perked up and slightly big as well. Her skin is creamy-brownish and it is also extremely smooth. She was roped in by Natalia and made her debut with her chrysanthemum on MC.
Leaf on Fire (MC Admirer) - She founded Tongqiu's fan club; ordinary-looking, C cup, slim body and childbearing hips again (oh boy). Chestnut long hair, brown eyes, and very loyal to MC. MC also liked her quite (yay).
Pira (Maid) - A 16 yo, table is justice, extremely black short hair and black almond eyes. She gave MC a head massage without even being asked, wasn't really good at it first but later on...
Two Girls - From the Clear Mist Restaurant, not named yet. A younger and a not so younger one, they and MC got along very well, especially with Diana's insistence on letting her watch his manual abilities after being apologized to by the same restaurant after the little drama with MC date with Natalia.
Blue Elf Milf - (Naming soon, NPC)
Lipa - Oldest daughter of the twin daughters from the bread shop. Lopi - Youngest daughter of the twin daughter from the bread shop.
Sonia - 20 yo, light brown short hair, creamy skin and crystal light green eyes. C cup, perky tatas; thick thighs and square buttocks.
Xueye - Black hair, brown eyes with reddish glint and with her hair having reddish tips. She be a table and has a very small body being 1.51n tall, goldish pale skin.
Saern - 21yo, twin of Romina. C cup breast size with a teardrop shape, pointy and small buttocks and a creamy orange skin color and light black eyes.Chestnut brown-shy long smooth hair with bangs covering her forehead.
Romina - 21 yo (surprise), twin of Saern. Same body as her twin but with creamy-bronze colored skin and darker black eyes. Chestnut bright orange long smooth hair with bangs covering her forehead.
Yun Yun - (???)
Ellie -Height: 2 inches lower than YB, Eyes: Black Iris, brown pupils, Lips: Plump rosy-crimson, Skin: Pure White, Nose: Elegant yet modest, Brows: Straight and smooth, Breast(:o): Proud Mountains of Heaven, Butt: Bouncy, yummy and juicy, Hair: Beautiful long smooth black-brown hair. Was living in the same apartment as YB, and only got together when she had to leave. (ID:???)
Cinders -15 yo (start of novel), long blonde hair. Broken glass, starry black eyes. Mesmerizing torso; extremely gorgeous, thick and soft bottom, full round amazing breasts (small at the start:p) and an extremely fit, athletic, seducing yet innocent body figure. She met YB in the little room of the Central HQ of Crestfallen Industry early on in the story. (ID: Little Phoenix Maiden)
Tonkia -NPC met YB by a rescue mission at the Novice Village, which they then got together, yayyyy. Blonde hair, emerald eyes that can change to a black color.
Tarn Natalia -Crimson-blood red hair, Eyes: Complete starry light blue universe, same age as as YB, freckled ass:$. Met YB at the hospital, and woala they now fuck, better than twilight. (ID: Mommy Heals You)
Irllytia -NPC Red haired, daughter of a family owning an Inn at the Azure Dragon City. Tonkia took a liking to her and ended up dragging her to a rented bed with YB... Black eyes, very into submission, lots of freckles, very slim, table like body.
Sylda -16 yo at the beginning of the story, Dark deep pink thin lips, modest B cup pointy archetype breasts, square shaped thick and well formed small buttocks. Very slender but fit body, left eye is grey and right eye is pitch black with long black ashy hair. Meets YB as he kills a field-type BOSS which she gets eaten by and then barely saved, gets adopted by Kalen. ID same as name.
Tarn Diana -Archetype small breasts, same as Natalia, incredible torso, magnificent abdomen yet not bulky. Bronze/coppery yet still white skin with a golden touch. Black hair ponytail like Natalia though shorter. Diamond shaped face, elegant nose slightly pointing upwards. Mature body, but cute and tender; around 4 years older than YB. (ID: Fragile Broken Eyes)
Nora Béart - Red crimson-black hair, as long as reaching half down her plump buttocks that have an inverted shape, C cup breasts that are temptingly perky. Heart shaped face, cream white skin and dark-red colored pupils which are the most attractive of hers. Met at Crestfallen HQ's, personal guide tour for YB. (ID: ???)
To read more, follow part 2 because this section is so well done that I write as if this was internet explorer!
Tornyllia -NPC Deep blue oceanic eyes that change to deep light blue (iris only though); as well with her hair except her pupils. Met YB when he chose his 2 gladius swords before being teleported to Main Kingdom and entering it for the first time.
Yona - Not that beautiful, very good at management and business, respected but somehow, YB is her weak point. Brown eyes, thin bridge and pointy nose. East west shaped E sized breasts, extremely well balanced body, leaning towards the slim and healthy side. Long hair, classic red colored style with long layers with bangs (at first). Modest ye full buttocks and her aesthetics are half-korean and european, ah. (ID: Found Miss Yona)
Itnia -Maid, 1.78cm tall. Luscious, naturally bright red lips, modest bosom and bottom. Long grey black hair, 17 years old, very loyal, hardworking, serious and devoted. Pale yet intensely bright creamy white rosy skin color. Bro/sis, it's a maid, she appears with the following other 4 maids. (ID: Adorable Serious Face)
Estel -Maid, regular height, proactive towards MC, light ashy blonde colored hair of long-medium length. Bell-round shaped D cup, firm small butt and she is young but has such a mature body's charm, ah. Lightly bronze but white skin. Pure brown eyes. (ID: Master Please Accept Me)
Zi Fei -Maid, 1.55m tall, of curious nature and very well principled, medium short wavy hair length of a blackberry color with light violet iris and dark purple pupils. Small, lithe body. A cup east west breast yet ample and perky square bottoms that are unimaginably bountiful. She is 14 yo. (ID: Little Curious Eyes)
Cyn Flick -Maid, 1.70m tall, short smooth brown hair. Cute, adorable baby cheeks yet her bright silver eyes emanates maturity and wisdom. Brown milky skin and a thick and effervescent bubble butt. Very caring, astute, gentle and good singer. Only 1 year younger than YB. 3(ID: Spiritual Mommy)
Fosk Yao -Maid, adopted the Fosk surname when young. She is 1.49m tall, extremely pure and cute, very shy and effeminate. Short hair of a warm golden chestnut color, AA cup conical breasts, small yet 'full' vase shaped bottom. Pure golden iris and a sparkling lavish gold for her pupils. (ID: Little Yao Yao Yao)
Read more at part 3 or die of ignorance!
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Xiao Ruo -Maid, height of 1-47m, 14 years old when she appears, which is once she is safe to appear before a crazy man (YB). Pitch-black abyss silk-like watery hair that reaches inches under her bottom. Pure, softest and delicate creamy white skin. Oval shaped perky, bountiful big and thick buttocks. AA cup conical breasts, she fell for YB in less than half and instant. Extremely timid, introvert and easily blushing for YB. Obedient, mild and submissive for him though awww💓. A total genius, hardworking nature. (ID: Cute Rawrr)
Zyv -Lithe, delicate figure. Pale-white hair that is short and wavy. Sky-blue glowing white iris and pupils (glows when close to YB). Table body. She is 15 yo and has pure white, immortal-like skin. Small lips and small nose as well as small ears which are all cute. Soothing and even motherly towards YB as well as receiving of him. But cold and indifferent for any other. ID same as name.
Sammy -Short Black hair, sharp platinum eyes and a prominent figure. She is Fusi's daughter, of the Black Lotus. They meet when YB was trying to go back to the Azure Dragon Sub-Division after traveling 2 Regions with Zyv. (ID: Juvenile Blade)
Sash -Archetype D cup breasts, big square shaped butt, thick thighs and childbearing hips, azure eyes and pale orange lips. As a Kernti, she has her wavy sexy long hair colored a natural orange, sexy too. Meets YB the same, when going back to the Azure Dragon Sub-Division after having a long date with Zyv; she basically deserted to the YB's dark side for him later on (not that late, ah).
Goddess Flor -Blonde hair, soft green-creamy eyes with her iris enlarged unlike a human's, with a black hole as her pupils but looking more like a star. She is 2.35m tall, H cup teardrop breasts and full heart shaped buttocks. More rosy than creamy, translucent skin. Met at the mission of YB White Space.
Kara -She is 24yo when she meets YB, long brown hair, nice enough thighs and round chest.Well formed butt with slender but 'resistant' body. Met YB at a jewelry store where her hubby helped her fuck the best man in the unvierse, *thumbs up*- She isn't harem, but her body is all his and no weird things going on, eh.
??? -Fiornyo's...
Ruo Paodan -NPC Pale silver whitish eyes, striking white skin with silvery touches and blindingly white medium-long hair length. A tomboy, table body with some little mounds up and down and thighs very irresistible for sex monster YB. Deceased Celestial White Tiger's daughter, 'betrothed' to YB as a wish.
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Yovilnnia -Daughter of Fiornyo, 22 years old. Very long Black-Violet hair with big female layer of hair on her left eye's side. C-cup wonderful teardrop shaped breasts(very important, indeed). Also 1.84m tall (yummy). A small but cute bum, pale but creamy skin and deep black eyes. She has the Kenln Bloodline eh~.
Yovilnnia -Very long black-violet hair with a big female layer of hair at her left eye's side. Wonderful C-Cup sized breasts with a teardrop shape(very important, indeed) and a height of 1.84m tall. A small but cute bum, yes sirrrrr, and a pale but creamy skin; yesh, white. Deep black eyes(O.O). She is Fiornyo's daughter and is 22 years old, she also has the Kenln Bloodline.
Feat - 26 yo, short brown hair, rosy milky skin, tomboyish body ah; with her ribs easily exposed by her skin. 10/10.
- Goodbye!! See you in the next journey~!!Jun 15, 2023
- SS 28 — (Final) Daddy Got Me A Good Husband~!!Jun 15, 2023
- SS 27 — The Grand BanquetJun 14, 2023
- SS 26 — Peace Before Leaving…Jun 14, 2023
- SS 25 — Everybody Is Living TooJun 13, 2023
- SS 24 — Pet WivesJun 13, 2023
- SS 23 — Selina, My SelinaJun 12, 2023
- SS 22 — Wolf Cubs And Conventional WifeysJun 12, 2023
- SS 21 — A Wolf, A Sister And A LeafJun 11, 2023
- SS 20 — The First Maidens…Jun 11, 2023
- SS 19 — The Fallen SummonersJun 10, 2023
- SS 18 — Three Blissful TigressesJun 10, 2023
- SS 17 — Tiara Dirna, Yun Beishang’s StarJun 9, 2023
- SS 16 — Promises Fulfilled (Continued And Finished)Jun 9, 2023
- SS 16 — Punishment, Intensive Healing And Promises FulfilledJun 8, 2023
- Content Warning
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- 160 plan to read
- 16 completed
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- 72 dropped
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Briefly: Take a look at the surrealism on the cover - it will describe all the phantasmagoria in the work and the mess in the writer's head. Turbidity, headaches, irritation are guaranteed.
Long:
The narration is sharp, twitchy, chaotic. It is impossible to read, so I refuse it.
Also I put 2/5, which only sh*tty works get from me. This is also on a par with works about R-18 relationships between gays, which, as a straight person, are of no interest to me at all. Only pure slag and plagiarism can fall below.
The only reason it's not 1/5 is the difference between the top ten chapters and the 160 chapters I looked at. And there are improvements, but it's still at the level of research material.
Reading a work is as difficult as theories and proofs in higher mathematics and sub-atomic physics. But if with mathematics and physics the difficulty lies in the fact that knowledge itself makes you dizzy. In this work, the problem is already in the method of transmitting information.
Of course, even without this massive fact, the work could hardly be considered something close not only to a masterpiece, but even just to a good work.
Implausible reactions and behavior. Excessive plot armor. "Smart", but damn stupid GG. Too much rush in the story.
Why is only one method of connecting to VR worth it, which contradicts the very loshika of a quality product (gloves... really?).
To sum up, there is nothing to read yet.
Until the author sits down and edits his sur to readability, while spending about a couple of months, this work can not even be touched.
Since in the current state, I can only say one thing: "Even my five-year-old drafts written on my knee look more readable than this..." And this comment is not so easy to earn.
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It seems that I can't rate this without putting it in my reading list, but it's a 2/5. Yes I know you are supposed to read at least 50 chapters before reviewing, but im breaing that rule for this book. So first impessions, it's chaotic, messy, and doesn't make sense. If you want to read this book start at the mid way point of Chapter 4. Anything before will RUIN your reading experience. I would recomend to just remove those chapters. For the writing, there is too much detail in the book. You are just trying to add random filler (you did admit to this). It's the worst filler as any other book has better filler than this. Other book adds useless things that keep people somewhat entertained. But this filler is called detail. Too much detail, half of the chapters is detail of this or that, might as well make a comic book it might be better.
For the Author if you are reading this, Don't write in first person for the first novel. If you do, I recomend to read Andur's Novels on RRL, they are gold and will help you understand what you need and dont need in a first perosn book. Starting with 3rd person you can pick RSSG to read. It had a lot of filler, but it's the ones that you can ignore and read through. Good Luck!
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this may or may not be an interesting series. I say that because I literally can't read it. It's in English, but I am barely able to process what's happening much less to who. The grammar is not english as far as I can tell, the words used are accurate but not good in context.
skipped to the latest chapter and it doesnt look like it cleans up much so I'm going to have to drop.
if this thing gets some TLC from an editor or something I'll check it out again, but as is I literally cannot read this without getting a headache
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This novel can be quite confusing in the beginning and takes awhile for everything to start coming together, but the author seriously work hard, in the development, immersion and world building which many authors don’t do, which makes the wait all worth it.
It’s exciting seeing the protagonist achievements and his time with his harem. And I hope to keep reading more of them.
Thanks for the hardwork author.
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