Rick made new rules for himself every few days. But there was only one rule that he truly always followed- Don’t stretch your legs more than the size of your blanket. The way to success was by not drawing unwanted attention.
But when the Inter-planar wars began, Rick had no other choice than to survive, and for that, he had to give up his laid-back lifestyle.
“Still not gonna be a hero!” Rick vowed.
Superhuman strength, agility, ability to use magic, telepathy, all sorts of talents emerged.
As heroes began to emerge among the population, Rick decided to take up the mantle of being the man in the shadows.
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Not too bad, but neither great. There are some grammar errors but nothing that makes it unreadable.
My issues with this story are:
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The worst of this novel is the language. It's not horrible really, much better than many translated novels I read, but sometimes it's just weirdly phrased and I can't get immersed in the story.
One thing I've noticed is that some of the story feel "forced". For example, (slight spoiler)
the author wanted the MC to have a buddy, so MC asked a stranger to do something super dangerous with him. That stranger was waay too eager to accept. And then they just start living together, with no explanation or talk about it.
To make it balanced, as all things should be, here's a good point. Contrary to the majority of novels, the sole important female character is not just a weak girl waiting to be saved by MC, nor a strong girl, but not quite as a strong as MC, that is just there waiting to fall for the MC. Overall, it is nice, but not a masterpiece either. Though it's just the 19th chapter, it can get better (or worse, we'll see)
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I will start this review by stating that this story is unique.I've read a lot of different stories based in this type of genre and this one shines as a new found favourite of mine.
The main reason is to do with the good writing of the female characters:
The author treats the characters like they're people with likes and dislikes and history behind them. This seems basic at first glance but when you consider there are at least three main reoccurring female characters something so basic becomes something monumental. (I'm counting a side protagonist, possible antagonist and an not-human character as of recent developments)
They aren't just love interests to throw themselves at the MC's feet or ultra strong characters with no weakness only to be saved by the MC. No, they're characters with personality beyond the MC.
And it's just so refreshing. I love it!
Sometimes with other stories I get really attached to the female characters just for them to be reduced to damsel in distress shallowness.
And I usually have to start a story with, "This story is interesting but will it treat its female characters right?" and it's just like waiting for the other shoe to drop. Dread just hangs over my head when it becomes apparent that these ladies could literally be replaced with a lamp and have nothing change.
But I don't have to worry about that with this story, I have faith in the writer considering how the characters have been written so far. And that one of the three characters is literally the MC's sister. So no need to worry there. By Chapter 3 I knew, that I could relax.
Thank you Cold_Sun Thank you.
The idea is unique, and the cleverness of our MC is good. And there's worldbuilding, I really enjoy finding out about the world as the MC does. It's interesting and I love learning about how everything works and different areas and just- well it's good!
Our MC is a scholar type character and I really don't think I've really encountered a true scholar MC before so I'm intrigued!
I promise it's interesting and you can just feel like the future is going to get wild and amazing! There's foreshadowing happening too! ≫:y !! SO YES, that is my review!
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It’s good, would definetly recommend, a bit cliched, but still.
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Overall it seems like it has great potential, but the language has some mistakes, though they're no deal breaker. The story is interesting and makes me want to see where it goes.
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I love it so far keep going I like the characters the world and story progress
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Mann why... just why has the MC become a bigass wimp..... I thought gaining the first of a number of mission and a whole lot of information he would be super strong......
Learning runes and what not while people have already built their bases and he has been trying to learn a whole lot but others are just able to copy..... and up till now he hasn't even earned any money which he aims to earn...
Mann it's good to built up but when will the awesomeness of the MC start..... or why make him the MC at all.....
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I came for "hero supplier" and all I got is the most generic fantsy with all the cliche tropes you could think of, including "ha seems weak what a loser" later turning into "dam we underestimated him, he's a good guy, punish all those he didn't like", face slapping, finding random egg and accidentaly raising it by feeding it some random sh*t, having powerful identity that has your name but in reverse and, of course, the entire premise of "well world now evolved f**k you and your techology go fight magical beasts with magical stick. Oh, and we have a crappy system, too!"
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