You really do have a fantastic story to tell, in my opinion. It has numerous progressive portions and many memorable highlights from its characters. 

A solid cast of characters and a clear sense of progress can be seen in the story. It's definitely a lot of fun, so it might be worthwhile to read the remaining chapters just to find out what happens after that.

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This book is very interesting and it's a shame it hasn't seen so many readers. It reads well, but the screenplay-style dialogue will be an issue for a lot of people in this site. Although I can see it being a really enjoyable read for people who like the sound of something fresh and challenging.

I really do think that you've got a great story to tell. It's got a lot of moving parts and a lot of character moments. The story has a good cast of players and seems to be moving in the right direction. It's certainly a lot of fun, so it could be worth reading the rest of the chapters just to see what happens next. 

The most compelling thing about this to me is that it has the potential to be truly epic. It's interesting how you describe the plot so far. It looks like a fun ride. I  look forward to seeing how this series develops. I'm excited to read the rest. 

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