This is a story about a young man that, through a series of mundane and unnecessary large events, finds himself reborn as a mana core , that is both male and female. His or her nature lead to the birth of her own daughter. Now, together with her daughter, she discovers the laws of a reality with a natural energy called mana, while constantly trying to fix the issues her actions lead to.

This is the first time that I write anything on the scale of a book/novel and I am not a native english speaker, so the tense might be a bit wobbly and some things might just sound really odd for you. I can take some critic on my writing though, as I am aware that I'm not that good at it. I know where I want to go with my story, but as I have no script I have a lot of freedom.

The rewrite is done let's throw a party! (Though without me, I'm shy)

Thanks for reading!

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ActionAdventureFantasyIsekaiLitRPGMatureRomanceSlice of Life

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Artifact Crafting Artifacts Beastkin Bisexual Protagonist Bloodlines Body Tempering Caring Protagonist Cautious Protagonist Character Growth Crafting Curious Protagonist Dense Protagonist Dungeon Master Futanari Game Elements Godly Powers Hiding True Identity Level System Lucky Protagonist Magic Magical Technology Non-human Protagonist

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Chapter 96Jan 25, 2023
Chapter 95Dec 29, 2022
Chapter 94Dec 26, 2022
Christmas specialDec 23, 2022
Chapter 93Dec 22, 2022
Chapter 92Dec 19, 2022
Chapter 91Dec 15, 2022
Chapter 90Dec 12, 2022
Chapter 89Dec 8, 2022
Chapter 88Dec 5, 2022
Chapter 87Dec 1, 2022
Chapter 86Nov 28, 2022
Chapter 85Nov 24, 2022
Chapter 84Nov 21, 2022
Chapter 83Nov 20, 2022

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rowan0999999

Status: chapter 44

Jul 31, 2022

A good story so far and a good balance of world building and MC development Idk why nobody reviews story's that are great like this. Though opinions do tend to differ. Yet why are there 340 people reading this while not reviewing.

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sageforce

Status: chapter 39

Nov 2, 2022

after reading a few chapters of this story I can say it has all the markings of a good author with a plan for the story and a good sense of worldbuilding.'

Be warned that this story has fallen into the not uncommon trap of giving a Non-human MC a projection/avatar/transformation, that allows them to be human or at least human like, and then proceeding to ignore (or at least reduce the focus on) the Non-human version of MC

Author has decided to make 2-3 chapters of "human" content per one chapter of non-human content.

(at least this is better than some other stories that completely ignore the fact MC is not human, (until its suddenly convenient for the story))

i do hope the story continues with the current quality, it may even become one of the top stories on this site one day.

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