A LitRPG Apocalypse from the perspective of a Dark Elf
The elves took everything. Following a bloodied slaughter of her whole race, and struggling to stay alive, she had no choice but to survive on her own. That was until the world changed. Her entire planet; a whole cluster was introduced to the vast universe by The System, or perhaps God. A universe filled with endless beings and civilizations that fought for power and dominance.
After the integration, Blair finds herself in a forest surrounded by unknown beasts, peril lurking, alone. Alone and with nothing but the mentality to survive, she will have to get stronger in this new unforgiving world of numbers and power.
With nothing but the capability to get stronger, her distant dreams of revenge might just become a reality.
Okay let's start off by saying it was a great start to the story, the character seems determined and with a tough and clear goal, and has opportunities ahead. I can say that I'm looking forward to the future of this story, because I think it might be one of my favorites, and many others.
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It's OK all things considered. The pacing is slow and ponderous, with lots of POV - changes. A little less dialogue and more action would be great, especially in the beginning of the story as it seems like characters would bring out their tea set the next moment while continously rambling on. Could probably be a great story, if it just got going properly.
Edit as of chapter 80: it actually gets worse as the story goes on. Pretty lame in all.
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This is incredible. I'm honestly having an amazing tome reading this. Great spelling and it all flows through. Even the conversations flow well. Definently worth 5 stars and a favourite on every chapter
Good job XD can't wait for more
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the story itself is quite coherent, and all pieces slowly fall into place. Hopefully it will continue as it is.
the story is dark, but not overly gruesome and the MC has her flaw's. Each chapter you can see her grow, her way of thinking changing/evolving.
looking for the future of this story
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Incredibly confusion and very short story. Suddenly talking about champions, prophecies, challenges, and I kind of just gave up at that point? Would not recommend.
Grammar was good I guess?
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