Some parts move very slow and are riddled with details, however, it doesn't make the story drag too much. Also, pictures. As someone who reads on a laptop in public, I can't say trying to focus on the story while having two large anime girl pictures is comforting.

Some of the later chapters feel like filler, but getting past the one or two pages like that, you're met with more fun. This entire U20 tournament arc also has points stretched past what I find enjoyable.

That was all critiques, but the story itself is great. Almost every fight is described, even if they don't contain particularly important information. The long chapters, that may not go into the part you're looking forward to, build suspense for them. Character development has gradual progress, and, perhaps to some's enjoyment, with the overwhelming flurry of names you get an excess of people to like or look forward to if others aren't to your liking.

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As a reader, I tend to not not write reviews or comments. In fact, this is my very first review on a story. To say I am hooked would be an understatement - it is one of my favorite novels of all time.

• Plot: One of the greatest downfalls of various stories would be failing to catch the readers' attention. As a reader, I have dropped lots of great novels due to certain arcs failing to entertain me. This story however, was able to keep me engaged throughout the chapters, with almost no "boring arc" or "repetitive plotline". Occasional comedy of this story keeps my mind refreshed, and there is a clear storyline that progresses at just the right pace.
• Game Aspect: The MC, despite being OP as a player, does not break the balance of the game, unlike certain VRMMORPG novels. The main PVP aspect in this novel involves a mixture of fast paced action (as stated in the synopsis) as well as certain elements of MOBAs (my personal opinion) such as three lanes and "roles/classes". It is ultimately a team game, and while it is within the realm of possibilities for a single skilled player to carry an entire game, it does not happen often. What I can say is, the author obviously has deep understanding on video games.
• Action: The action scenes are some of the greatest I have seen. Unneeded details are briefly walked through (I really appreciate that, some novels drag on the action scenes with unneeded details) and iconic scenes which decides the result of battles are well written and descriptive.
• Characters: Perhaps one of this story's greatest strength is the balance between "characters with iconic traits" and "characters who feel real". For example, we have the "edgelord" trope in fiction. They are often one dimensional characters with the only way to describe them being "well the character is edgy." In this story, there certainly is an edgelord, but the author does not make it his entire personality. The character acts and thinks like a "person" instead of a "character". In addition, character interactions are natural. In short, the important characters in this story interesting with unique traits, yet feel alive, though some unimportant side characters can be cliche and one dimensioned. 
• Multiple POV aspect: Perhaps one of the risky things to implement into a story would be multiple perspectives. In this story, while the MC stays as the focus, we get to see different events happening around the world through different character POVs. On one hand, we get more character development from side characters and they feel like actual humans instead of mere stepping stones for the MC. On the other hand, we get less of MC screentime, and her own development. This, however, does not take the focus away from the MC, and I believe it is a good implementation of multiple POVs.
• Grammar: Personally, what I care the most is readability. I can easily understand every sentence in this story. There are no phrasing which I find unnatural. As a non native English speaker, I do not find any major grammatical error. 

Ultimately, this is one of the only three novels that managed to keep me checking for new updates on a daily basis. No matter how flawless a novel is or how great the writing is, one "boring arc" or unbearable development is all it takes for some readers to drop a story. While I wouldn't say this story is without flaws, I am certainly consistently obsessed with the story and eager to know what happens next, and that, in my opinion, is the most important thing about a story.

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I enjoy this story quite a bit. &Nbsp;Some of the positives so far (chp 46) :

• The writing is solid, fleshed out characters and world with an interesting setting and backstory
• The MC has an interesting past and it's good to see her going through adversity even though OP
• I tend to skip overly long RPG action nonsense (a battle taking several chapters of this skill and that skill)  and this story has action that is engaging, concise, and doesn't overstay it's welcome

I just have one complaint really and that is with the yuri/romance/mature tag. &Nbsp;I was just hoping for a little more fleshed out romance honestly. &Nbsp;There's a lot of 'anime' tropes in this story, and even though the characters are in College the Romance piece feels like we're dealing with a High School yuri anime romance. &Nbsp;

Now, that could just be because it's early in the story and the MC is working through her own stuff (trying not to spoil stuff here), but that aside with the mature tag I don't need smut, but having an actual adult style romance with one or more of the love interests I think would make the story more enjoyable at least for me. 

Again early in the story and maybe the author has something in mind with that. &Nbsp;That complaint aside it's still a great read and would highly recommend.

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Tired of all the smuts and plotless stories on this site? Well, you're in luck, you stumbled upon a masterpiece in the making (if the author doesn't drop it of course). This story has the strongest start I've seen in any of the novels I've read... ever. And to top it all, the writting keeps getting better and better 

The grammar is good except for some missing punctuations here and there and some capitalized words but it not hardly noticeable.

The style is where it shines. I honestly haven't seen any author with a style like this on all the novels I read. One thing you're reading then next you suddenly laugh out of nowhere. Reminds me of gintama. 

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no words. Its good. I read other books waiting for this one to update. Thats how much I like it.

edit:ffs I cant edit the stars. I'm sorry if this affects the story. But the important thing is its good. Trust

edit edit: I edited the stars. I'm up to chapter 48 now. Its still going strong for me. 

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Great story.

Good interactions.

Makes you want more.

I want to eat some tacos. 

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Honestly I’m up to date and have to state I’m a fan. The grammar is solid, the storyline is interesting and the world is fascinating. Our MC quit esports and honestly has one of the best reasons I’ve seen for it in an esport series. There’s a good mix of focus between in game and out of game. The main caveat is be wary if you don’t like little pictures sprinkled through your stories. Overall? I’m a fan. And if you like esport VRMMO stories I’d suggest giving it a try.

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One of my favorite stories on this site, I like the banter and the main story, combat is pretty engaging, game mechanics are not to complicated but not simple either so its a good balance, some characters I dislike, but with the amount there is its only natural, I also really like MC here.

Art in chapters is a nice bonus btw, even tho I dislike the style, other people might enjoy it and it will never hurt the story, imo art is a bit too "cute" for my liking.

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I binged it in an afternoon and the only issue I have is the focus on so many povs and different characters while the MC plays a more minor role. I started skipping through quite a few chapters because they weren't that plot relevant.

I hope that the mystery won't be kept up much longer. It is character growth that she's even touching the game to begin with, but...

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Great story comedy and action, I like the dialogue of the characters each have their own personality.

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