On the night when the saviour of the wizarding world was supposed to be born, Harry Potter the saviour was killed by the Unforgivable Curse.
The man who had made almost all wizards in Britain fear to call him by his name, regained the intelligence and ambition that had been rightfully his from the Horcruxes.
Darkness completely enveloped the island of Great Britain.
Wizards were divided by bloodlines, with purebloods firmly holding the power that belonged to those at the top, and those who were known as mudbloods were left to spend their lives as humble as mud to be trampled on.
The Ministry of Magic, where justice should be served, is filled with evil villains, and the castle, where knowledge should be taught, is filled with oppression.
It was in this grim time.
Jon Green, who has transmigrated, is brought into the fugitive carriage that carries on the true spirit of Hogwarts.......
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Author: sea ship
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https://www.69shu.com/txt/44408.htm
This is ongoing fanfic with more than 150+ chapters, so you can support original author in Chinese site.
This is dumb. The whole thing.
Grammar: definitely translated. Misspelled words, wrong words, stilted conversations, switching tenses, etc. Major detractor for the story.
Style: Hard to tell with the bad grammar.
Characters: Shallow shadows from the original series. Often act nonsensically. Main character is unrelatable.
Story: Bad. God awful even. Basically Voldemort won, but Dumbledore and friends still fight and are the 'resistance'. Except the resistance has downs syndrome. The best the resistance can do is some crummy wagon 'school' that has things like summer break. Why? Because the original is a school setting so we've gotta follow suit. Followed up by contradictions in the story and an infinity stone subplot that is literally useless, the story falls flat. There is a nice twist at the end of the first volume that is pretty good, but that's it. Everything else sucks.
This fanfic doesn't add anything to the Fandom and should be avoided.
-Gaddyboy
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The concept is great when compared to the standard Harry Potter fanfiction. Harry Potter the character is the problem in the standard fic in my opinion. He acts as an anchor that prevents the story from changing and is overall not an endearing character after you've read about a hundred fanfics. Getting rid of him and throwing the world into turmoil is a fantastic idea to revitalize the story.
The story keeps all the important aspects of the canon, no alternate universe fanon nonsense or out-of-character characters in this fic.
That said, I skipped a ton of chapters and only read the ones with titles that interested me. A lot of the explanations of established lore are necessary, particularly in the context of the changed timeline. However, I didn't want to go over it again. The MC Jon is pretty standard as well. He's a great vector for the plot and not a gary-stu, but he doesn't grab my attention too much neither. The course of the plot itself is much more interesting.
I'd definitely give this one a go if you have the time.
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