I have some gripes about it though. There's the wish extending complaint that is actually fairly easy to ignore. The main issue is that he hardly manages to change anything and his relationships with others seem skin deep.

He claims to wish to protect those close to him but he doesn't try too. He "let his guard" down against a spy that he was already suspicious about and had led his team into a trap. He didn't seem interested in changing the Rin, obito situation. He left Danzo alone to scheme and kill those close to him and only dealt with him once Danzo ordered him to be attacked directly.

The protagonist is a power hungry cold-hearted hypocrite who doesn't seem to care that much. He and kaguya doesn't seem that different; actually, thats mean to kaguya, she was okay but then went crazy after eating a fruit. In a way her problem was she cared too much, going psychotic overprotective parent mode. Wow, that went on a tangent...

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RedLark

Status: c0

Aug 23, 2020

I think its coming along great I have to check my phone multiple times a day because I'm already hooked to the novel and can't wait for updates keep up the good work. Can't wait for more

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Wotdaduk

Status: c55

Feb 1, 2022

3☆ and I would have gone to 2☆ but the novel have good fights.

Here is what you can expect from the novel. Frequent bad grammar which is tolerable but the worst thing about this novel is the majooor plotholes and just lazy writing that contradicts alot of stuff.

If you really wanna go in blind for this novel then go ahead but if you wanna know how bad the plotholes are then check out the spoilers and they are not too big of a spoiler so it wouldnt hurt to look imo.

Spoiler

So one thing to keep in mind is that our MC have no problem about changing the original timeline since he has done it multiple times even before he was officially a full fledged ninja. Also our MC loves his family and his close friends and that he would protect them so obviously changing the original timeline is the logical thing to do. WRONGGGGG our MC does not prepare jack sh*tttttt and he didn't even bother to at least train rin, obito and kakashi so that they would be stronger or more versatile enough to change their fate. Also there is this one time where our MC accepted a mission that he knew was a trap because he knew DANZO set it up and he should have been extra careful and alert at all times buuut nope he threw all caution into the wind after finishing the mission without any problems which should have been a big red flag and thus two people in his team died and the author used it as an excuse to awaken his mangekyo sharingan.

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Tldr looooots and looots of major plotholes and just bad lazy writing overall but hey if you can just gouge your eyes to ignore said plotholes and you are just here for the action then its a decent read.

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Makarov1234

Status: 208. despair

May 29, 2021

This story is fantastic. The character design is good and the world development is also great (despite this being a fanfiction.)

If their is one thing to complain about it's that the chapters just aren't coming out. Author if your Reading this we love your story and kindly wish for more chapters.

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Tuskinator

Status: 176. hokage is my dream

Feb 9, 2021

I really enjoy this story. It's a fulfilment story but it's not forced. Everything doesn't just end up working out for the character, he works for everything he gets. (Bellow doesn't spoil much plot, just first chapter.)

Spoiler

He doesn't work for the boons, but everyone needs a little luck.

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From what I can see right now, there will be some large additions to the world of Naruto, however they all feel like cannon and I'd be very happy if they were added to Boruto. I don't read that much fan-fiction but I made this account just to say how much I like this story and I hope the author keeps up the great work.

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Cryzy

Status: ch 43

Sep 21, 2020

One of the best Naruto fanfics out there. This is definitely one of my favourites, so I really really hope the author does not drop this.

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Tsukinotaku

Status: c100

Mar 2, 2022

MC is a total fence sitter

He had multiple occasion to save the lives of the people he care about but because of poor planning or bad priority he either completely ignore the death. he could have easily prevented or arrive too late to do anything

He was supposed to have a good friendship it Obito's team yet he just stayed on his in position at war EVEN THOUGH he could already use the Flying Thunder God Technique and go rescue them

Instead he would rather slaughter hundreds of shinobis who won't affect the war's result at all

So far the only big change he did is save Sakumo give Naruto someone to actually take care of him

You could literally skip a 100 chapters and know the plot since the author doesn't change anything from the original plot only add new characters for the sake of his weird Grimoire of Sin plotline

I only read up to 100 chapters right now so I hope it get better in the 200 chapters left....

TL;DR:

Dude is op as hell but won't do sh*t to save people that matter and change the canon in any interesting way

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Paulmesh

Status: rebirth

Jul 13, 2021

A brilliant work, and wonderful fan fic.

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Cerberus

Status: rebirth

Sep 19, 2020

Really love this novel hope it goes on for a long time concept is amazing the original ideas especially the sin of seal looks like it will be cool

just hope author doesnt drop the novel

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Orion4144

Status: c250 or so

Aug 24, 2021

I really like this naruto fanfic, even as a not-so-versed fan of naruto I find it interesting. The story is great even in the later chapters and the MC is also likable. When first reading I was very confused with names of countries and characters but after Googling them a few times I wrapped my head around it. Soooo, yeah good read and definitely cool OP MC.

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