This story is okay. Maybe good.

I have some gripes about it though. There's the wish extending complaint that is actually fairly easy to ignore. He hardly manages to change anything and his relationships with others seem skin deep.

He claims to wish to protect those close to him but he doesn't try too. He "let his guard" down against a spy that he was already suspicious about and had led his team into a trap. He didn't seem interested in changing the Rin, obito situation. He left Danzo alone to scene and kill those close to him and only dealt with him once Danzo ordered him to be attacked directly.

The protagonist is a power hungry cold-hearted hypocrite who doesn't seem to care that much. He and kaguya doesn't seem that different.

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I think its coming along great I have to check my phone multiple times a day because I'm already hooked to the novel and can't wait for updates keep up the good work. Can't wait for more

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One of the best Naruto fanfics out there. This is definitely one of my favourites, so I really really hope the author does not drop this. 

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Really love this novel hope it goes on for a long time concept is amazing the original ideas especially the  sin of seal looks like it will be cool 

just hope author doesnt drop the novel

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Impressive work and plot 

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