A medical student died because of negligence of the authorities. Later, he is granted a second chance in life with some boons. But being an Otaku and Naruto fan, he chooses to live in the chaotic world of Naruto.
The story will follow canon for the initial part with a new plot. Major changes will reflect in the later part as our MC grows up. The story has strong AU elements and the power scaling is ramped up to explore various foreign elements in Naruto. Everything in its entirety will be a part of the Naruto series with details and speculations of my own.
This story is my original creation, and I post it on Scribble hub and Webnovel. You might find a few initial chapters on Royal Road.
Note:- The starting 40 chapters or so have poor grammar and various mistakes since I was a new writer back then and lacked experience. But I am working on editing them.
Warning:-I don't own Naruto or any related stuff except my MC and Original characters and jutsus. (Yep, there are lots and lots of original jutsus in the story.)
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This story is okay. Maybe good sometimes.
I have some gripes about it though. There's the wish extending complaint that is actually fairly easy to ignore. The main issue is that he hardly manages to change anything and his relationships with others seem skin deep.
He claims to wish to protect those close to him but he doesn't try too. He "let his guard" down against a spy that he was already suspicious about and had led his team into a trap. He didn't seem interested in changing the Rin, obito situation. He left Danzo alone to scheme and kill those close to him and only dealt with him once Danzo ordered him to be attacked directly.
The protagonist is a power hungry cold-hearted hypocrite who doesn't seem to care that much. He and kaguya doesn't seem that different; actually, thats mean to kaguya, she was okay but then went crazy after eating a fruit. In a way her problem was she cared too much, going psychotic overprotective parent mode. Wow, that went on a tangent...
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3☆ and I would have gone to 2☆ but the novel have good fights.
Here is what you can expect from the novel. Frequent bad grammar which is tolerable but the worst thing about this novel is the majooor plotholes and just lazy writing that contradicts alot of stuff.
If you really wanna go in blind for this novel then go ahead but if you wanna know how bad the plotholes are then check out the spoilers and they are not too big of a spoiler so it wouldnt hurt to look imo.
So one thing to keep in mind is that our MC have no problem about changing the original timeline since he has done it multiple times even before he was officially a full fledged ninja. Also our MC loves his family and his close friends and that he would protect them so obviously changing the original timeline is the logical thing to do. WRONGGGGG our MC does not prepare jack sh*tttttt and he didn't even bother to at least train rin, obito and kakashi so that they would be stronger or more versatile enough to change their fate. Also there is this one time where our MC accepted a mission that he knew was a trap because he knew DANZO set it up and he should have been extra careful and alert at all times buuut nope he threw all caution into the wind after finishing the mission without any problems which should have been a big red flag and thus two people in his team died and the author used it as an excuse to awaken his mangekyo sharingan.
Tldr looooots and looots of major plotholes and just bad lazy writing overall but hey if you can just gouge your eyes to ignore said plotholes and you are just here for the action then its a decent read.
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MC is a total fence sitter
He had multiple occasion to save the lives of the people he care about but because of poor planning or bad priority he either completely ignore the death. he could have easily prevented or arrive too late to do anything
He was supposed to have a good friendship it Obito's team yet he just stayed on his in position at war EVEN THOUGH he could already use the Flying Thunder God Technique and go rescue them
Instead he would rather slaughter hundreds of shinobis who won't affect the war's result at all
So far the only big change he did is save Sakumo give Naruto someone to actually take care of him
You could literally skip a 100 chapters and know the plot since the author doesn't change anything from the original plot only add new characters for the sake of his weird Grimoire of Sin plotline
I only read up to 100 chapters right now so I hope it get better in the 200 chapters left....
TL;DR:
Dude is op as hell but won't do sh*t to save people that matter and change the canon in any interesting way
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Whew, what a ride. I decided to stop reading this because the author seems never allows any critics in his head. The story so far is good enough, not good but also not bad. It was just the author was just too whymsical. He made the already super strong MC became weak out of sudden just because he wanted to make a certain event. 'I want a darker plot', he said. And then continue to nerf the MC power because of it. I don't see much prospect from an author like that, that's why I stopped reading this. Don't want to waste my time on stupid novel.
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I think its coming along great I have to check my phone multiple times a day because I'm already hooked to the novel and can't wait for updates keep up the good work. Can't wait for more
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Overall messy story that goes in all directions, some parts of the plot have never been told (the story of Hinata's kidnapping for example and some others, even when they are explicitly mentioned), the author has the disease of those who write Fanfics in that he wants to preserve the main lines of history / canon beyond the raissonable. I think the overwhelming majority of people here have already read dozens of fanfics that are just Canon++ and it's getting boring. The author does a good job of world-building and that's the main thing that keeps me going.
Another problem is that a love story with Tsunade was implied from the start but ended in the most horrible way possible (it was a misunderstanding, basically, I won't say more) to preserve the monogamous couple between the MC and Mei (a relationship that came out of nowhere and was honestly a bad idea) and not offend the anti "harem" psychorigids. The style isn't bad, there's a good diversity of Jutsu and enemies, so there's not really anything redundant about it.
A good read if you like fanfics in the Naruto world, but keep your expectations moderate and you'll probably enjoy the read.
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It's a 2 star but I missclicked
Another fanfic where the author doesn't change anything of the original history
The inconsistency of the MC and his values are annoying asf
he says that he is going to protect his loved ones but doesn't do anything when he could
It's supposed that he knows about Danzo's plans but he it's stupid enought that he enters the trap willingly ignorant, even though he already has his suspicious and shishui already had a bad premonition but the author just killed the teammates to upgrade his and shishui sharingans to mangekyu ones.
And no, the MC didn't get more op because the author forcibly nerfed the MC with an annoying seal that drains his chackara, btw that seal was the most stupid thing that the author did
How the f do you touch something that already looks spooky asf, just a dumb way to nerf the mc
the MC it's your annoying careless dude that always makes the bad decisions, the author it's forcing the plot (mc) to follow the original cannon, the only thing that changed was the death of White Fang, everything else it's just a self fulfilling history about a guy who changed nothing but has his resolve of protecting his loved ones but fails miserably everytime, well I think that the ones who died weren't that important to our splendid MC, what makes this an hypocrite MC the ones who the majority of us dislike the most
Anyway this history doesn't deserve this rating
I can see that thanks to the others reviews the history doesn't get better and the author managed to nerf the MC again
So I'm dropping this
If the history gets better ket me know thx
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This story is fantastic. The character design is good and the world development is also great (despite this being a fanfiction.)
If their is one thing to complain about it's that the chapters just aren't coming out. Author if your Reading this we love your story and kindly wish for more chapters.
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I really enjoy this story. It's a fulfilment story but it's not forced. Everything doesn't just end up working out for the character, he works for everything he gets. (Bellow doesn't spoil much plot, just first chapter.)
He doesn't work for the boons, but everyone needs a little luck.
From what I can see right now, there will be some large additions to the world of Naruto, however they all feel like cannon and I'd be very happy if they were added to Boruto. I don't read that much fan-fiction but I made this account just to say how much I like this story and I hope the author keeps up the great work.
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One of the best Naruto fanfics out there. This is definitely one of my favourites, so I really really hope the author does not drop this.
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