This story is okay. Maybe good.

I have some gripes about it though. There's the wish extending complaint that is actually fairly easy to ignore. He hardly manages to change anything and his relationships with others seem skin deep.

He claims to wish to protect those close to him but he doesn't try too. He "let his guard" down against a spy that he was already suspicious about and had led his team into a trap. He didn't seem interested in changing the Rin, obito situation. He left Danzo alone to scene and kill those close to him and only dealt with him once Danzo ordered him to be attacked directly.

The protagonist is a power hungry cold-hearted hypocrite who doesn't seem to care that much. He and kaguya doesn't seem that different.

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I think its coming along great I have to check my phone multiple times a day because I'm already hooked to the novel and can't wait for updates keep up the good work. Can't wait for more

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This story is fantastic. The character design is good and the world development is also great (despite this being a fanfiction.)

If their is one thing to complain about it's that the chapters just aren't coming out. Author if your Reading this we love your story and kindly wish for more chapters.

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I really enjoy this story. It's a fulfilment story but it's not forced. Everything doesn't just end up working out for the character, he works for everything he gets. (Bellow doesn't spoil much plot, just first chapter.)

From what I can see right now, there will be some large additions to the world of Naruto, however they all feel like cannon and I'd be very happy if they were added to Boruto. I don't read that much fan-fiction but I made this account just to say how much I like this story and I hope the author keeps up the great work.

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One of the best Naruto fanfics out there. This is definitely one of my favourites, so I really really hope the author does not drop this. 

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A brilliant work, and wonderful fan fic.

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Really love this novel hope it goes on for a long time concept is amazing the original ideas especially the  sin of seal looks like it will be cool 

just hope author doesnt drop the novel

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I really like this naruto fanfic, even as a not-so-versed fan of naruto I find it interesting. The story is great even in the later chapters and the MC is also likable. When first reading I was very confused with names of countries and characters but after Googling them a few times I wrapped my head around it. Soooo, yeah good read and definitely cool OP MC.

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Though there are things to be criticized in the mc's actions, that can just be counted as his mistakes and flaws and it makes it somewhat realistic since we all know that there's no perfect person and not everything will go according to your wishes. 

What I appreciate in this story is how the author tries hard to logically explain the techniques and their prerequisite. 

I'm not really satisfied by how the romance is made since I don't think the MC has absolute reason to like the female but the romance is just a bonus to the story so overall I really like it and I don't think it deserves the rating so 5 star for me.

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This is the best Naruto Fanmade LN that I  have ever read.

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