Not much to say aside from the fact that having the MC getting off by backdoor action done on him is a major turn off....
Seeing a potential harem member who already had some physical actions with the MC willingly and proactively getting it off with a demon and having the time of her life while doing so is also not my cup of tea in a harem story.
The author doesn't seem to have any issue crossing boundaries men normally deem as amoral/unrespectful, which is not a major issue for some, but was too much for me.

The MC is likable (your typical beta MC), but overall really pathetic with heavy mommy issues.
The women in the harem hogging all the actions as well as important decisions by heavily influencing the MC, so much so that as the story progresses, the MC feels more and more like a background character...
The fact that the MC "favorite" harem member is a "know-it-all-keeping-all-valuable-information-to-herself" type of character, while interesting at the start, quickly becomes old and at some point frustrating to read.
The only redeeming feature I find in this novel is the fact that it is well written and devoid of most grammatical shenanigans normally seen on this website.

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Sometimes a book is much more than it seems at a first glance. Behind the apparent facade of a smutty story lies a surprisingly deep fantasy tale with epic battles, heartwarming (and heart wrenching) moments, playful silliness, mysteries, an amazing world building and characters so well developed that many of them are capable to be protagonists on their own right.

For those of us who started our journeys elsewhere, it's a joy to be able to re read the story here. Join us for a story that will in turns make you laugh, make you cry, and make you horny, but will never fail to entertain you.

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• Good story with much content to come (at least 5 already written volumes).   I started reading it back then on another site (that started deleting it for no reason) for the smut in the beginning but the plot sucked me in.  Its a little diamond in my eyes. 
•  The writing and style is good and the plot makes me look forward to the next capter. The smut is also good by the way 11/10  Would recommend 

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I don't usually leave reviews... but you know this makes me sick, under my belt I have so many novels that sh*t... I'm an old man on this page too... not as much as Doct but I'm my years old and this book is exasperating.. It's like Naruto and I hate Naruto very strongly, it's not one of those novels where you smoke it without thinking a lot, it forces you to go over paragraphs and paragraphs of s*x that don't add sh*t... in fact it looks like Netflix and You know what I'm talking about... for example, there are paragraphs where one of the girls in the house is with a minotaur or another character and describes s*x and blah blah blah... while we were in the middle of a super important event with MC... I mean, they cut the scene because of s*x that I don't want to see and it doesn't bring me anything. Anyway, I know myself, I'm going to continue reading and it's difficult for a book to arouse anger after reading so much that something generates emotion well this book is for you if you have enough patience to eat a buffet of secondary characters that dwarf the MC and wait for book 5 for the MC to be half developed, at least that's realistic, personal development sucks and takes ages... but f**king 5 books for a MC of a novel to barely get some thorns out is bullsh*t

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The smut is really good, but the story kept me coming back.  Very well written, and I'm looking forward to reading what's to come.

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great story so far, read upto here in a week. Looking forward for more chapters.

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Read everything posted so far, seen this story develop in to an amazing tale that has draw readers in and kept them.

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In all and total honesty, this will be the first time I have left a review for any author (book reports with opinion in school do not count) as it is outside my usual circle of give-a-damn. That said, this series is also one of the few that I have invested this much time in, reading every spare second I had, even at work. ERD's* are great for obfuscating what one is giving their time to, especially when the subject matter is on Literotica. 

I have most of the chibi style sticker set, and hope that the current selection is not all that are/were planned, there are far too many missing. Also looking forward to more books being produced into audiobook format (easier than an ERD for what I do.)

That is all I have for now. Please, keep up the good work.

MK

a.k.a. The 69th Bastard Son of The Devil 

*Electronic Reading Devices (for those unused to acronyms.)

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It was a great read together with supplementary series it's well worth being turned into an actual novel. I'm quite sure Mike is not the main character in the story and never will. I build my RPG universes from top to bottom unlike the conventional bottom to top style, so characters build last, and entire universe build first, your style is similar to mine (maybe other way around) that also be the reason I'm drawn in that much waiting for future adventures of your players and see how the universe unfurl. I hope for your continuing success.

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