Calls the story Man of the House, and proceeded to have MC f**k literally ANYBODY but the people in his house. Gets in the car with some random f**king milf after skipping out on his home... and when he DOES actually have MC f**k say London, it skips the scene and says “the next morning when I got up” as if we didn’t all click this story because we want those scenes in here. Straight up offers s*x to horndog sister and she says “nah but I’ll record you f**king some other chick seem fine?” Listen man, if you’re gonna call the story man of the house, try to have the MC f**k the people from that house. You’re great at writing the lewd scenes, you just decide not to include them for some reason, and it’s annoying.

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This has an interesting premise, and I really enjoyed the early chapters which featured a more intelligent and sometimes ruthless (albeit immature) MC, with engaging situations and interactions with the cast.

However, those interesting situations soon disappear, with the MC devolving into a braindead s*x seeking zombie, having s*x with anything that moves, regardless of the obvious consequences. The decisions made become more and more irrational, with the MC seemingly unable to grow or learn from any mistakes, making it a frustrating reading experience.

The smut is quite well done, grammar is very good, however the weakened plot revolving around the MC's ever regressing pitiful personality makes it hard to enjoy.

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Another quality offering from whatsawhizzer. The plot reminds me of the now classic doujin series and manga The World of Moral Reversal. There's a huge potential for interesting developments and shenanigans, not only in the smut department but also in the social commentary realm, in this setting.

These first few chapters had a very nice balance of smut and world development. A very nice balancing effort by the author.

Really liking the MC. We're still in the beggining stages, but he's shaping up to be an interesting one to see grow and flesh out. 5/5*

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Wish fulfillment about a guy who gets konked on the head and wakes up in a world where the social norms and roles for men and women are reversed.  Most significantly, men are the moral gatekeepers regarding s*x, rather than women.  

Noah, takes advantage of this by slutting it up with EVERYONE with little to no concerns regarding any medium or long-term consequences for himself or his family (whom he is on track to ruin).  He has assumed the role of a heartless slut who gives and promises the other s*x whatever they want in order to get what he wants (s*x, money, grades, etc.).

The s*x part appeals to the expected audience.  The story is building towards, what I hope, is a burning train wreck for the MC.... He will ruin his reputation.  Ruin his sister's lives.  Break his friend's heart.  Possibly put his life in danger (with husbands and/or women who are legitimately confused by his amoral behavior and "willfully negligent" messages he puts out promising what he has no intention of delivering).  His mom might get arrested. ... If the author is honest, he might have an interesting situation for the pathetic loser slut guy to dig his family out of towards the end of this chapter and/or arc, if he is willing to face up to his sh*tty juvenile selfish s*x-crazed behavior.

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Could be a lot better, but fails hard in a few key areas. The first, and biggest issue is the horrible MC.  A weak beta bitch boy with a bratty personality, slow wit, and a habit of whining. The story is basically a gender role reversal where the male MC acts like a slutty teenage girl with no brain and serious daddy issues. Could be interesting, but the MC was a wuss to begin with and only embraces it more. The second issue is that basically every other character aside from the MC is the same personality. The only exception is the mom... And even then just a little.  At 40+ chapters in, the others chars should have personalities, but all of them are forgettable and just differentiate by name.

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Really enjoy the story, though I have some recommendations if you want to do another like this in the future. 

If you want to alter the gender roles and drives of people so dramatically, alter their biology too. If you want women to see men as small and weak and frail, make women taller, with greater bone and muscle density and make men shorter with less muscle and bone density. If you want women to be more desperate for s*x and have males as the gatekeepers for s*x, lower male birth rates. Maybe not to absurd levels, but maybe 1 male for every 2 females. Introduce some scarcity.

That’s pretty much all I can say negative about this. Love the story. Definitely 5 stars for anyone interested in reading well written and unique smut.

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This actually something new that I haven't seen before which is pretty rare as most books are quite repetitive so its really nice to see a new concept especially for a book like this, author keep up the good work.

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I didn't start reading this story with much of anything for expectations.  In the end, or as of chapter 41, I found the story rather surprisingly enjoyable.  

There are a few gripes I have.  The MC, while appearing to analyze the gender role swap, still manages to be blandly hypocritical a couple times and I'm not sure if the author didn't see the hypocrisy or wrote it intentionally.  If it was intentional, I would have liked to see some indication of the intent, but probably mostly because I find blatant negligent hypocrisy frustrating.

Grammar is decent.  There are only a few mistakes (substituting Peak for Peek, for example).  Even though this tends to be a pet peeve of mine, it was definitely readable.

The MC is a teenager who had his whole world turned upside down, so he can be forgiven somewhat for his angst, but there may have been a bit more than necessary.  That being said, it's hard to have character progression if your character has no flaws from the start.  He does at times act in ways that gets other people in trouble and he lets them twist in the wind.  I'm hoping this trait is a growth opportunity rather than a continued theme.

The six sisters acting like dudes at the dinner table was hilarious and I'm not even sure why.  There are several gems like this sprinkled throughout the story and I thoroughly enjoyed them.  

The premise is interesting.  There is a good deal of introspection, as you can imagine, and it's written well enough that it didn't get boring for me.  There's a great deal of charm throughout that more than overshadowed the little gripes I had with the story.  

For those concerned that there is no family relations, the family side appears to be a slow burn as his and their boundaries slowly come down.  I can see how this can be frustrating for those who just want some spank fuel, so if you want immediate gratuitous family play, this may not be that story.  I tend to enjoy slow burn aspects of relationship building, so I consider this a plus.  There's enough other nookie to keep the smut tag relevant without devolving into a bad porno.  There's even a good bit of character growth with much of it, so it doesn't even qualify as gratuitous in many cases.

TL;DR This story is quite well written, fun, and interesting for a story with the 'smut' tag.  I had a few gripes, but overall it was surprisingly enjoyable.  Not quite 5 stars, but a solid 4 for me.

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