Calls the story Man of the House, and proceeded to have MC f**k literally ANYBODY but the people in his house. Gets in the car with some random f**king milf after skipping out on his home... and when he DOES actually have MC f**k say London, it skips the scene and says “the next morning when I got up” as if we didn’t all click this story because we want those scenes in here. Straight up offers s*x to horndog sister and she says “nah but I’ll record you f**king some other chick seem fine?” Listen man, if you’re gonna call the story man of the house, try to have the MC f**k the people from that house. You’re great at writing the lewd scenes, you just decide not to include them for some reason, and it’s annoying.

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This has an interesting premise, and I really enjoyed the early chapters which featured a more intelligent and sometimes ruthless (albeit immature) MC, with engaging situations and interactions with the cast.

However, those interesting situations soon disappear, with the MC devolving into a braindead s*x seeking zombie, having s*x with anything that moves, regardless of the obvious consequences. The decisions made become more and more irrational, with the MC seemingly unable to grow or learn from any mistakes, making it a frustrating reading experience.

The smut is quite well done, grammar is very good, however the weakened plot revolving around the MC's ever regressing pitiful personality makes it hard to enjoy.

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This was disappointing enough that I made an account just to review smut. First off, the story is competently written with minimal grammar errors and a smooth overall flow. The smut itself is solid and enjoyable, without suffering from either repetitive descriptions or alien explanations. The issue is that I did not sign up for a smutty treatise on s*xual harassment and gender disparity in our world. On top of a story that reads more like a gender bender than a fantasy, I don't exactly get off on watching a guy slowly have a mental breakdown as his desire to bang women clashes with his womanly struggles.

The protagonist themselves flips between power-drunk on being able to exploit and emotionally manipulate women, to weirdly tender, to aggressively lusting over women, and then disgusted with them. Telling a girl he banged to breakup with a creepily possessive girl he also banged for him, feeling traumatized about her spreading rumors, and then just happily dressing up in 'slutty' clothing to go on a date with her after she set (and recorded) a rape pile of women on him. Not that I would complain, but his whole thing was being disgusted with women taking advantage of guys moments before that.

It's just, if you want to write smut about a horny guy landing in a utopia of horny women, write that. If you want to write a story challenging guys to experience s*xual harassment from a female perspective, write that. But don't smash the two together so you wind up with a horny, bipolar, and emotionally unbalanced guy that can't decide if he wants to emotionally abuse his family or rail them over the couch. I'm not reading incest smut to have my face rubbed into the plight of the modern woman via a guy who's about as stable as a house of cards someone set on fire.

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Wish fulfillment about a guy who gets konked on the head and wakes up in a world where the social norms and roles for men and women are reversed.  Most significantly, men are the moral gatekeepers regarding s*x, rather than women.  

Noah, takes advantage of this by slutting it up with EVERYONE with little to no concerns regarding any medium or long-term consequences for himself or his family (whom he is on track to ruin).  He has assumed the role of a brainless slut who gives and promises the other s*x whatever they want in order to get what he wants (s*x, money, grades, etc.).

The MCs brain turns to mush and he stars acing like every other person in his new world, rather than someone from a different world exploiting the differences. The s*x part appeals to the expected audience. But because of the MCs lack of guile or control, and indecision regarding his family, the story is building towards, what I expect, is a burning train wreck for the MC.... He will ruin his reputation.  Ruin his sister's lives.  Break his friend's heart.  Possibly put his life in danger (with husbands and/or women who are legitimately confused by his amoral behavior and "willfully negligent" messages he puts out promising what he has no intention of delivering).  His mom might get arrested.

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This was a really infuriating read, all the elements for some good smut are there, some scenes are good, but its completely ruined by the main character and his spastic ass, he can not stop himself from doing and saying the most inappropriate thing posible at all times, he would not stand a chance even in a world with nothing than horny women willing to f**k anything, he's a squirming mess of a bit*h in all senses and if I had a word to perfectly encapsulate his whole character it would be "Worm"

In fact, im so upset by this I WANT YOU TO READ THE STORY, I want you to share my anger a bit, just to feel a bit better about myself, I personally read up to chapter 30 and skimmed the latest chapters to see if it gets better, spoilers, it doesn't

There's been a lot of apologist for MC's room temperature IQ, saying that he was horny, that he was a teen, that he was a dumbass, but when every single solitary decision made by the MC is a mixture of embarrassing, infuriating and ret*rded, does any of the previous reasons matter? Are you willing to read the story of an increasingly more effeminated man fumbling around in a world of horny women? And if after reading all that you're still interested, READ AWAY, DUMBASS! WASTE YOUR f**kING TIME! HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!

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This was terrible. The MC is as dumb as a bag of rocks. It's gender reversal amplified x 100. The author has put his extreme s*xism on display for everyone by writing this. It's a disgusting misrepresentation of either gender like he chose the worst examples on the planet to fill the roles. It's filled with huge gender cliches that have been put to rest over 20 years ago and have no place in today's society. At first, it was interesting to read and see how delusional this author is, but then it just got worse and worse. 

The occasional well-written smut supported by the dumbest plot I've ever seen in my life. The author should have spent more time on the smut—which is rarer than you'd think—instead of trying so hard to give it a plot. No one is here to read in-depth about your delusional interpretation of gender roles or read about a teenager constantly pitching fits and pouting.

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Another quality offering from whatsawhizzer. The plot reminds me of the now classic doujin series and manga The World of Moral Reversal. There's a huge potential for interesting developments and shenanigans, not only in the smut department but also in the social commentary realm, in this setting.

These first few chapters had a very nice balance of smut and world development. A very nice balancing effort by the author.

Really liking the MC. We're still in the beggining stages, but he's shaping up to be an interesting one to see grow and flesh out. 5/5*

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The author is really impressive at making an absolutely deplorable character. Repeatedly, he makes the same mistakes over and over. He'll make a comparison to "what would this be like if genders were reversed again" and see what the situation would be like, and then proceed to ignore it again. He actively screws with his family's feelings and feels ok with it because "they were mean to me before". When in reality they were normal and he was the same entitled asshole he is in the story. He has shown no character growth at all and the plot has devolved as the story goes on to trying to f**k every person that gets introduced. The story has chosen to focus on drama but ensures that we can't expect anything but the worst from the MC so it's hard to care.

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TLDR; A reverse world with a super horny braindead teenager makes dumb decisions and doesn't learn from them.

The beginning gives what you'd find typical in this type of story: the MC gets to experience what it's like to be an "e-girl." The news outlets show girls saying "I'm just saying it's nice to see guys gay for each other." Women commenting on one another's tightness size, how p*rn has extreme emphasis on the guy, etc.

So the setting takes anyone new to this story archetype by surprise in a way. Most of the same stories end up forgetting to take the setting seriously. And to whatsawhizzer's credit, he remembers.

Instead, whatsawhizzer forgets something more important. Main Character development. The main character complained about his life, suspecting girls wouldn't understand the hardships of a guy. He gets the result he wants. But reality teaches him the opposite: what it's like to be a girl. I should end the review here, but this would make it sound like a feminist perv fantasia and one with a semi-meaningful story.

And to some extent, that's what it is. However, it's done in a very, very awkward way. It feels more like the story is a slut simulator porngame with a female protagonist. In a lot of ways it really is, but with the occasional feminist political message.

I guess it's closer to a genderbender story if anything, since in a way his mindset is genderbent from the roles the world effectively assigned people.

Basically it'll say "See? Look how it feels to be on the other side of this? See? They're judging him as a slut because he walked in with makeup on his neck." Then you'll say "I mean, ok, he is a slut." "But society in these circumstances looks down on him." "yeah and he doesn't seem to give a sh*t that he's ruining his life and reputation." "Yeah! Just look at that! He's now going to suffer consequences for his actions! Look how unfortunate this is for him! He's going to get kidnapped!" "Yeah, he walked into a seedy bar at night with gangsters nearby.... underdressed and got drunk out of his mind. What a surprise he was taken advantage of, almost kidnapped and raped."

I guess in a way he doesn't give these stories the seriousness they deserve.

And you know... I wouldn't even be so bothered with this if the author just made the MC use 1% of his brain. The MC basically laughs off the fact that he was almost kidnapped and raped. He enjoys the s*xual harassment. The author treats very extreme circumstances with humor, which is a sharp contrast to his seeming desire to make a serious believable reverse world. Passed the intro during the locker room rape the MC endures, the MC briefly reminds himself that he should take care not to ruin his reputation, before brainlessly making the same mistakes as if he didn't advance as a character.

Oh, but it doesn't end there. The author gave the MC the ability to fight damn well, because he was brutally beaten in his youth by other guys. What happens? He gets into a battle with a middle schooler and barely wins. Despite the middle schooler being a boy, (girl in our universe.) This tells me the MC, would struggle to win a fight against a middle school girl or that the author forgot the level of violence the MC should be able to dish out.

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Could be a lot better, but fails hard in a few key areas. The first, and biggest issue is the horrible MC.  A weak beta bit*h boy with a bratty personality, slow wit, and a habit of whining. The story is basically a gender role reversal where the male MC acts like a slutty teenage girl with no brain and serious daddy issues. Could be interesting, but the MC was a wuss to begin with and only embraces it more. The second issue is that basically every other character aside from the MC is the same personality. The only exception is the mom... And even then just a little.  At 40+ chapters in, the others chars should have personalities, but all of them are forgettable and just differentiate by name.

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